The Color of My Heart

May I show  you the shades of my colorful heart 
that are airbrushed in love like a true work of art 
May I play you a tune of my favorite song 
I'm here to engage you and help you be strong 
May I dance you to laughter and bring you a rose 
from a fastidious garden, where everything grows
May I pull out the stars from the heavens above 
and shake down the moon that is oozing with love 
May I dream of tomorrow alongside you my friend 
and show you the beauty, that only time mends 
May we visit the fairgrounds of life once again    
taking carousel rides from our happiness glen 
May I show you the shades of my colorful heart,  
they are airbrushed in love, a true work of art.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 8/27/2023 3:25:00 AM
This could be a sonnet my friend.. the flow and rhyme is lovely and I can see how vibrant your heart is with so many colours... Your choice of words are also so great...
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Date: 8/26/2023 3:32:00 PM
Vienna, your heart bursts with a vibrant kaleidoscope of colors. From the depths of your soul, emanate a cascade of joyful and uplifting thoughts, like a symphony of happiness that sweeps through every corner of your existence. Thanks for the comment and link you sent on my page.
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Date: 8/25/2023 9:08:00 AM
A sweet poem from such a loving heart. I like the way you started and ended your story with the same captivating lines and in between them, an almost musical rhythm. Love, love, love it.
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Date: 8/24/2023 3:26:00 PM
Wow! E. Browning you have serious competition! Gloriously romantic. You won me to your side of the line with the first verse -- though I am an easy push-over when it comes romantic lyrics. Blessings my friend. Great poem! A FAV!
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Date: 8/24/2023 5:42:00 AM
Beautiful work of heart my friend. In language of love!
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Date: 8/24/2023 4:55:00 AM
- A lovely poem, Vie Rose ... your heart is colorful, my friend :) - hugs
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Date: 8/24/2023 3:07:00 AM
Such positive thoughts from your heart, Vie. Any friend would be lucky to be yours.
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Date: 8/24/2023 1:35:00 AM
Lovely, God bless you friend. Love, Gina
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