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THE COFFEE MUG

The Coffee Mug Conspicuous trails Of coffee gone dry on mug Hot and fresh no more Cling like those few memories That mottle life's ceramic !
Copyright Anulaxmi Nayak, 2017 31st January 2017

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Date: 1/19/2018 3:14:00 PM
I like the extended metaphor here. I also like the "mottle life's ceramic" both for sound and sense. Good poem.
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Anulaxmi Nayak
Date: 9/18/2019 2:48:00 PM
Thank you very much dear Stephen Wilson Floyd :) Glad you liked my write!
Date: 3/24/2017 2:20:00 PM
Very good Tanka!
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Anulaxmi Nayak
Date: 5/14/2017 12:51:00 PM
Thank you Kash poet, I am glad you liked my tanka:) ~Anu:)
Date: 3/20/2017 4:32:00 PM
Wow! This is incredible. Wish I could look at the remains of coffee and come up with something poetic. Great job. Thanks for visiting my Never Shame a Woman
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Anulaxmi Nayak
Date: 5/14/2017 12:50:00 PM
Thank you dear Eileen, I am glad you liked my tanka:) your appreciation means a lot:) ~ love, Anu:)
Date: 3/11/2017 1:54:00 PM
Ooh! Sensational poem. I love the last line. Great words
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Anulaxmi Nayak
Date: 5/14/2017 12:48:00 PM
Thank you dear Phillip, I am glad you liked my tanka:) ~Anu:)
Date: 1/31/2017 11:19:00 AM
Wonderful write!:)
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Anulaxmi Nayak
Date: 5/14/2017 12:46:00 PM
thank you Dear Sunita, I am glad you liked my write:) ~Anu:)