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The Codominum

The earth becomes so congested Condominiums spring up Like mushrooms after the rain Rooms become so congested Like the hearts Full of greeds and dreams Like the souls Full of expectations and pressures Many hearts and many souls Confined in a block of cement walls But hearts and souls With different dreams and expectations Can never be confined Can never reach a compromise To keep peace and serenity On earth Even with God's advice

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Date: 7/17/2022 9:00:00 PM
Intriguing. I have often pondered the mysteries that lie behind each drawn shade in those cement blocks -- yearning for freedom. Kudos, Sai Lin!
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Sai Lin Lip
Date: 7/18/2022 12:18:00 AM
Some people like living at higher places.They say cleaner,quieter and cooler. But they seldom talk to their neighbours.Maybe they are too busy.Usually young guys live in condo.

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