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The Cobalt Coastline

Bluey black, clouds and waves Dark shades, shadow the nightfall The cobalt coastline http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/nature-5.php

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/3/2010 11:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry X3 making it through the first round James. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol

Margaret Foster

Date: 6/1/2010 6:52:00 PM

Congratulations on being among the first rounders in this soup contest. Way to go James...well done...Margaret

Date: 5/31/2010 2:59:00 PM

Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with three poems. Best wishes in the finals. Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/15/2010 6:26:00 AM

Love this one, James! So nice to see it featured again. ! Love, Carrie

John Loving Iii

Date: 5/12/2010 6:21:00 PM

such a wonderful blue. john

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/12/2010 1:14:00 PM

This is a wonderful haiku and I see why they chose it to be featured. Your imagery is divine. Congratulations! Aloha, Connie

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 5/12/2010 9:54:00 AM

Congrats on your featured haiku, James. Vince

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/12/2010 6:30:00 AM

Congratulations on being featured on home page....I have already commented on this one...Sara

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 5/12/2010 5:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your featured write this week. This is a wonderful haiku.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/12/2010 2:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your featured write this week James. Always a pleasure to read one of the best poets on the site. Love, Carol

Date: 5/11/2010 5:54:00 PM

Good use of imagery to share your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Way to go. Keep on writing. Karen

Janette Fisher

Date: 5/10/2010 1:53:00 PM

James - a wonderful haiku - I just love your writing. Congrats on this weeks feature. Rgds Janette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/9/2010 7:50:00 PM

Congrats James on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. excellent choice to feature and share with us all..luv.. from the "Sweetheart"

Thomas Stanton

Date: 11/9/2009 11:45:00 AM

Dear James, I had a question for you and tried to send it to your soup mail. I am very fond of your poem Cobalt Coastline.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/7/2009 6:58:00 AM

WOW felt I was right there.. magnificent description.. to start my weekend... Soup Mail... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetie"

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/1/2009 9:39:00 AM

What a wonderful image of the "cobalt coastline" you have painted, James! Excellent haiku! Love, Carolyn

Date: 10/31/2009 2:00:00 PM

Wonderful use of imagery to paint a picture with words. Well done. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Karen

James Marshall Goff

Date: 10/31/2009 6:04:00 AM

mysteries of the sea, cool!

Marty Owens

Date: 10/30/2009 9:18:00 PM

Very nice James...Love it...Marty

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/30/2009 6:12:00 PM

Yikes.. this is lovely..I particularly like Blue black. BG

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/30/2009 4:41:00 PM

I see the scene. It is almost as if I am there. Keep writing. Sara