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For YOUR CHOICE O Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

At twelve forty-five, the clock struck one, and when it had seen what it had done, after sixty more minutes flew, that timekeeper struck two. It never learned, next to the shelf: "Always keep your hands to yourself", so, it continued its violent spree. An hour later, it struck three. Reinforcements came through the door - but, too late, that timepiece struck four. We could only hope to stay alive, when Big Bad Ben struck five. We knew we were in a terrible fix when that chronometer struck six. Three went to hell, four to heaven, when that outsized watch struck seven. The FBI came to investigate when that mad sundial struck eight. The national guard stood in a line, and the ticking demon struck nine. I prayed it would never happen again. Just then, the awful beast struck ten. When I cast my eyes up to heaven, that hunk of gears struck eleven. Into the hour's nature, my mind did delve, as the clock, time's agent, struck twelve. A riddle: how much blood did it spill? Seventy-eight, it would kill. And now, by order of fate's decree, time is racing after me. So, when I hear the clock strike one. I know it's time to run.

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Date: 4/15/2025 8:20:00 AM
Hello David, Wow, this ticks like a time bomb where each strike a heartbeat, each hour a fresh reckoning. I see Big Bad Ben’s gears grinding through heaven and hell, that final “seventy-eight” echoing with Hitchcockian dread. Your words are the clock, each line a pendulum swinging between wit and doom. When time hunts, your verses outpace it. Spring Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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David Crandall
Date: 4/15/2025 7:45:00 PM
Hi Daniel, Sometimes, I feel like time pushes on very relentlessly, and I'm on the run.
Date: 4/14/2025 11:16:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your creative/fun write. "Good Luck" Have a wonderful spring day and Blessed Easter.........
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David Crandall
Date: 4/15/2025 7:44:00 PM
Thanks Paula - happy Spring and Easter!

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