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The Clock of Life

The clock of life, nobody knows when it starts, or when it will stop. You should always be ready and be prepared, because you never know when the clock will stop. Don't hurt anybody and don't hurt yourself. Be very careful in what you do and what you say, because the clock is ticking - it's ticking away and nobody knows when it's going to stop. Each one of us has a clock, but we don't know when it will stop. It can be in the morning or mid afternoon. In the middle of the day, or in the middle of the night. But the hour will come and that's for sure, when the clock will stop and tick no more...

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Date: 7/3/2014 7:00:00 PM
Oh wow! great first poem to poetry soup, it is sure fun to go back in time. I enjoyed this very much, it is a great message!
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 7/3/2014 7:37:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading my first poem.
Date: 9/6/2012 7:51:00 AM
message for life, Lucilla, wonderful theme, just love this. just browsing your first poem posted here, not disappointed.
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Date: 5/5/2012 9:07:00 PM
Hey, I see this one got featured. a belated congrats to you. It's a great message.
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 5/6/2012 10:12:00 AM
Thank you Andrea; I don't know how to look for that. can you please tell me. Lucilla
Date: 2/22/2012 6:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Lucilla. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/20/2012 6:12:00 AM
No, we don`t know how long it is ticking,live to day my friend.- oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/3/2012 5:41:00 AM
Great advice to live by
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Date: 1/30/2012 12:46:00 AM
What you have stated here is the pure truth and also some wise advice. Good write Lucilla.
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Date: 1/24/2012 8:48:00 AM
Very true Lucilla, enjoyed your good work. Elizabeth
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Date: 1/23/2012 1:32:00 PM
Lovely poem Lucilla,the clock still ticking. :) - oxox love from Anne-Lise (welcome in PSoup and welcome to read mine poems) :)
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Date: 1/23/2012 12:45:00 PM
to block a commenter, just click on the eye of the comment, to unblock go to memmbers area, that should do your basic navigation you need~ and smile :) anything you need, you can ask anyone, they will give you advice or instruction. Liked the form of your poetry, straight and to the point, I like that kind of poetry the best. best of luck,
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Date: 1/23/2012 12:42:00 PM
welcome to the soup Lucilla, you may soup mail me by the cup by my name to show you how to comment or talk in private, have a blessed day, Lucinda aka Cindy
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Date: 1/23/2012 12:33:00 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Lucilla. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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