Kristen Bruni Poet Lyric

The Clock

Tic tic toc 
Just started the clock
No place to go
No answer, don't knock.

I'm working away
At my favorite hobby
Rhyming and writing
Oh Loddy Loddy.

To write is to breath
To breath is to write
To take in all my words
In morning and night.

I sing and I dance
In public or home
Yet I always am moving
In my own zone.

Freestyle I will
In poetry and song
Rappers might do it
I cheer them along!

So live, love and pray
Enjoy life you see
Because everyday
Is a mystery.


by : Kristen Bruni

(written in 125 seconds)

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Dr.Ram Mehta May 5, 2011 at 3:24 PM I visit to read your first poem posted on the soup. I think this poem's magic can be revealed if one reads aloud, kristen

James Fraser December 11, 2010 at 7:38 AM Blimey, this was written fast. Every day we enter sure is a mystery of life >> James :)

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 5, 2010 at 9:25 AM Congratulations Kristen, You have made it through the first round of judging for Poetrysoup October 13, 2009 poetry contest with your poem, "The Clock". Wow! You said a lot in 2 minutes. Great poem and philosophy. 2009 was a successful year of poetry for you. I come, now, wishing you continued success in your writing endeavors throughout 2010 and for many years to come. God be with you. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Carol Sunshine Brown December 22, 2009 at 10:29 AM Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals Kristen. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol

Elaine George December 21, 2009 at 10:00 PM Dear Kristen, Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on advancing to the finals. Lainie

P Sheart December 21, 2009 at 8:22 AM Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty

James Fraser December 20, 2009 at 9:34 AM Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James

Malcolm Dyer November 19, 2009 at 2:55 PM Once again cograts keep on keeping on

Janette Fisher November 18, 2009 at 11:03 AM COngrats on being featured this week. Rgds Janette

Iolanda Scripca November 16, 2009 at 9:06 PM Congratulations on being featured this week. Love, Iolanda

P Sheart November 16, 2009 at 11:28 AM Congrats on your feature poem this week! Love Light Patty

James Fraser November 16, 2009 at 10:32 AM Many congratulations on your poem being featured this week >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown November 16, 2009 at 5:20 AM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

November 15, 2009 at 7:05 PM Kristen, I just wanted to drop in and add congratulations on having your poem featured to my other comment. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown August 26, 2009 at 4:43 AM Welcome to PoetrySoup Kristen. Good luck in the contest with this write. Love, Carol

August 25, 2009 at 5:14 PM What an uplifting view on writing. Wow! You wrote this in a little over two minutes. Impressive. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

James Fraser August 25, 2009 at 3:58 PM Super write in super time, a delight to read, the joys all mine. A warm welcome to the Soup Kristen>>James

Sara Kendrick August 25, 2009 at 11:48 AM Love it. I am sure that this express some many people here thought in a nice way. Keep writing. Sara