The Cloak of Despair

The heart pulsates with times I remember
So pained to my soul you have become
My eyes see cold ashes without ember
As tomorrow fades from view, I succumb
Buried lonely inside, where silent tears flow
Love seems fleeting, carried by a sad wind
While it glides beyond farthest reach I know
And claims the untraveled distance within
As nights begin to merge like flowing rain
To pelt the fogged window of my glass heart
I'll melt into the darkness balled in pain
Then rip out the reasons where footprints start

They'll be no yesterday's in a black sky
Only bright stars retreating as I cry


Frederic Parker
9/25/14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Kopec Avatar
February 26, 2015 at 2:16 PM
Good poem I especially like the last verse
Duncan Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 12:07 AM
Very nicely done :)
Sergi Avatar
February 24, 2015 at 12:56 PM
Beatiful poetic wordage and emotional too. My compliments, Frederic
Johnson Avatar
February 24, 2015 at 12:49 PM
The fever subsides as the rain comes down. It may take years or maybe getting out of town. But the darkness fades as those stars come out. And sooner or later someone begins to remove the doubt. Love your lines Fredric.
Rowley Avatar
February 24, 2015 at 10:19 AM
A fine sonnet, deeply felt
Diaby Avatar
February 24, 2015 at 10:05 AM
wonderful poem...really impressed.thank you for inspiring us
Roper Avatar
February 24, 2015 at 9:41 AM
Beautiful write, I love the way it flow every line. 7 Blessings
Dillenbeck Avatar
February 24, 2015 at 9:30 AM
Deeply dark, yet richly transparent and accessibly luminous. Thank you for giving voice to my more silent screams. Gerald Oliver
Eaton Avatar
February 24, 2015 at 9:24 AM
Beautiful and filled with so much emotion. Love it. Janet
Relish Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 6:36 AM
Your words just flow... and its a pleasure to read your sonnets... such a lonely soul, all alone and fading away... very touching... another one of my fav #7... nad
Goff Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 7:06 AM
'And claims the the untraveled distance within' wonderful line, Frederic! I could go on! 'Only bright stars retreating as I cry' another! And on and on! Brilliant! jmg
Callus Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 11:07 AM
This is a touching and sad poem, Frederic. May tears sooth the aching heart. Congrats on your win. // paul
Onclaud Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 8:22 AM
utterly fascinating, Frederick... shine on!.. huggs
Allison Avatar
September 30, 2014 at 11:58 AM
Beautifully penned emotional sonnet Frederic many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Parker Avatar
October 1, 2014 at 2:38 PM
thank you Jan for reading
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 30, 2014 at 9:11 AM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely Sonnet.
Parker Avatar
October 1, 2014 at 2:39 PM
thank you Brenda for reading
Mehta Avatar
September 30, 2014 at 6:01 AM
Nicely done sonnet, congrats. Frederic
Parker Avatar
October 1, 2014 at 2:40 PM
thank you Dr Ram for reading
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 1:41 AM
Truly a wonderful sonnet Frederic! Melancholic and mesmerizing! #7
Parker Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 6:31 PM
thank you Connie for the kindness
Dietrich Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 10:11 PM
Stark images of despair with the rain and the bright stars retreating. I loved that line!! You are such a great sonneteer, Frederick!
Parker Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 5:30 PM
thank you for your kindness my poetic friend, had to dig deep for this one...
Onclaud Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 12:39 PM
deeply quilled; raw and personal Frederick... I love this!.. huggs
Parker Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 5:32 PM
personal yes from many many years ago, thank you my friend
A. Sharma Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 11:09 AM
Such an emotive masterpiece leaves one pondering! Amazing power of words Frederic!
Parker Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 5:33 PM
it's good to ponder to seek out reasons to unanswered questions, thank you Dr Upma
Petersen Potter Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 10:41 AM
Very emotional beautiful sonnet Frederic! xxx D.
Parker Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 5:35 PM
Dorian thank you my new poetic friend, I'll seek out your poetry and read
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