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The Clearing

I look around me; wow, this is unexpected! Myriad strangers are milling about (thousands at least) on the expanse of a plain that feels endless even though I can see far out to a horizon of verdant shining trees encircling us all. The atmosphere here feels incredible (and I don’t mean just the quality of the air.) It’s as if wisdom has permeated all those here assembled, such that a feeling of overwhelming peace abides here. Within moments, I notice several figures approaching me. Their eyes, softly radiant and seeking me out, fall upon me with inexpressible joy. I see my father, a few of my dearest friends, my grandparents, my favorite aunt, Joan, and my beloved brother Dale, who was taken from our family while still in his prime. He reaches out to embrace me, and among this sea of souls, everything becomes clear. Feb. 19, 2023 for The Clearing Poetry Contest of Craig Cornish

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Date: 3/3/2023 7:27:00 PM
Lovely write Andrea. It's clear that you captured one great expression of "the clearing". Thanks for you feedback too!
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Date: 2/21/2023 2:54:00 PM
Nice piece.
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Date: 2/21/2023 6:22:00 AM
Wow , what a beautiful place to be ,a place of overwhelming peace, love it,
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Date: 2/20/2023 9:55:00 PM
An unearthly experience, never troubling but extremely pleasing, perhaps a reverie or a fantasy ! Glad you could meet all your deceased dear ones ! Really enjoyed Andrea !
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Date: 2/20/2023 9:38:00 PM
This wonderful poem touched me, Andrea, and the ending warmed my heart. Thank you for sharing. :)
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Date: 2/20/2023 11:36:00 AM
a lovely vision....and one the heart clings to....i share this with you, thanks for hearing the song within....loved it
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Date: 2/20/2023 4:24:00 AM
Brilliant, Craig should like this one, it doesn't matter, I did:)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/20/2023 11:43:00 AM
He should? Hmmm, I can only wish!
Date: 2/20/2023 1:40:00 AM
Andrea, you always spring on us some fantastic poems. Very original. Hugs.
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Date: 2/19/2023 5:00:00 PM
A heavenly clearing where loved ones are found, lovely write Andrea
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Date: 2/19/2023 2:53:00 PM
Loving piece expressing heavenly aspirations, AD. Well conceived art, indeed. ~;o]
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Date: 2/19/2023 2:50:00 PM
goose bumps dear poet, 'cause i just went several yearz uv, dying! Now, i'm surviving....though mine youth may be aged, mine engram appears to be; the well uv remember! I thought that i wuz about to see my loving grandmom there for a minute...this write hit me Andrea, ty...have the splendid vinter girlie...much love, james
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