The Clambake

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The sun scattered through the cloaked clouds And the dawn light appeared But soon the thunder blast was loud And rain drew as we feared Written: February 14, 2022 Bite Size Poem No.36 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/12/2022 12:49:00 PM

Charming ~

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/19/2022 7:48:00 AM

WoW! Lasaad, Your poem is packed with good imagery and content. Congrats on your win-Alexis

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/16/2022 6:29:00 AM

Your imagery is always deep and creative, as is it is when you describe this beautiful scene - an awesome pic, but what a shame that the storm stopped their awesome sunny day! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 2/16/2022 3:42:00 AM

I like how the weather can be whimsical, heavy winds here at the moment, rattling around the house...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/15/2022 7:51:00 AM

Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Rain can ruin a day at the beach but you were going to get wet anyway but that lightning is a real bummer. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/15/2022 6:41:00 AM

Great imagery, Lasaad.

Valsa George

Date: 2/14/2022 8:38:00 PM

Thunder rain is so frightening . It still scares me .A vivid scene is skillfully portrayed