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The Clambake

The sun scattered through the cloaked clouds
And the dawn light appeared
But soon the thunder blast was loud
And rain drew as we feared


Written: February 14, 2022

Bite Size Poem No.36 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Line Gauthier November 12, 2022 at 12:49 PM Charming ~

Alexis Y. February 19, 2022 at 7:48 AM WoW! Lasaad, Your poem is packed with good imagery and content. Congrats on your win-Alexis

Jennifer Proxenos February 16, 2022 at 6:29 AM Your imagery is always deep and creative, as is it is when you describe this beautiful scene - an awesome pic, but what a shame that the storm stopped their awesome sunny day! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Delice Arleen Skelly February 16, 2022 at 3:42 AM I like how the weather can be whimsical, heavy winds here at the moment, rattling around the house...

Sara Kendrick February 15, 2022 at 7:51 AM Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Rain can ruin a day at the beach but you were going to get wet anyway but that lightning is a real bummer. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Vijay Pandit February 15, 2022 at 6:41 AM Great imagery, Lasaad.

Valsa George February 14, 2022 at 8:38 PM Thunder rain is so frightening . It still scares me .A vivid scene is skillfully portrayed