The City Mouse

The city mouse hitched a bumpy ride In a demolition dumpster To the spacious country side When he landed on the Ground, he ran so fast Without a sound~ Quiet mouse Loved the Ride
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Horne Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 5:20 PM
lol, loved this jolly write, Sara
Dietrich Avatar
August 6, 2013 at 4:24 PM
so sweet, dearie!!!
Horsman Avatar
August 6, 2013 at 9:56 AM
love this Sara, and it's imagery you portray
Onclaud Avatar
August 6, 2013 at 9:17 AM
charming me all the way, sara.. you put the extraordinary on ordinary slices of life.... wonderful!..:) huggs
Gorelick Avatar
August 6, 2013 at 7:41 AM
Ill bet this does happen, enjoyed this cute piece. BG
Sivey Avatar
August 6, 2013 at 7:00 AM
I really loved the story you have shared with us about this lovely mouse and the country side, his ride was sure delightful! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this amazing poem this morning! You have impressed me with another Nonet, you are doing well with them! What a wonderful piece, Great Work!!
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