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The City Mouse

The city mouse hitched a bumpy ride In a demolition dumpster To the spacious country side When he landed on the Ground, he ran so fast Without a sound~ Quiet mouse Loved the Ride

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 8/7/2013 5:20:00 PM
lol, loved this jolly write, Sara
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Date: 8/6/2013 4:24:00 PM
so sweet, dearie!!!
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Date: 8/6/2013 9:56:00 AM
love this Sara, and it's imagery you portray
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Date: 8/6/2013 9:17:00 AM
charming me all the way, sara.. you put the extraordinary on ordinary slices of life.... wonderful!..:) huggs
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Date: 8/6/2013 7:41:00 AM
Ill bet this does happen, enjoyed this cute piece. BG
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Date: 8/6/2013 7:00:00 AM
I really loved the story you have shared with us about this lovely mouse and the country side, his ride was sure delightful! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this amazing poem this morning! You have impressed me with another Nonet, you are doing well with them! What a wonderful piece, Great Work!!
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