The City

The slithering winds passed through my ears,
While hounds of cars and bikes were passing by,
Like a pilgrimage of sheep, heading towards somewhere,
There was smoke and dust in the air, 
Intoxicating me into its thin layers,
For a moment, I was alone. I can smell the rotten buildings
Which they call heritage, 
A dome stood in front of me, it was almost fifty feet high,
It was on the corner of a building, built like a Colosseum, 
Showing symmetry on its rounded side, the windows were many,
Yet I suffocated seeing it,
The tall, pale columns of Corinth and Ionia,
I was petrified, I don’t know why.
The grey atmosphere seemed terrible for humans.
Trees black, sky grey, so the tall buildings were,
Suddenly, I was in the traffic, water gushing from a street tap,
There were horns blowing all around,
Soon I reached the bridge and it was infested by Devnagari,
The yellow Ganges flows beneath it, 
ships were busy, so everyone was,
It was not the first time leaving the city,
But it felt so.
I paid the driver upon reaching the station, and stopped thinking much.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Agustin Avatar
April 7, 2026 at 12:04 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Daniels Avatar
April 4, 2026 at 10:11 PM
A very vivid picture of a writhing part of the city you’ve painted here, Fardun. Well done for expressing such details as it affected you. First line of poem is effective & last line has much staying power. A lot of potential in this poem. ThkU for sharing. Keep writing & posting & reading the poems of others. Your writing skills will soon soar. Sending blessings.,Ghairo
Middya Avatar
April 5, 2026 at 12:29 AM
It is my delight to hear from you Madam. Thank you so much for your kind and appreciating words.
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