The Circle

We learn to sit and then to crawl
Because our view is just too small.
From crawling next we start to walk;
Confinements only make us balk.

Once we can walk, we learn to run;
Our exploration has begun
And once adulthood is unfurled,
We head on out to see the world.

The years flash by; our running days
Return us to a former phase.
Again we walk, with waning pep,
Reverting to a slower step.

We skip the crawl but soon see fit
To find a cozy place to sit
And once we’re settled in a seat,
We know life’s circle is complete.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Krutsinger Avatar
April 26, 2022 at 12:24 AM
This happens way too fast "Once we can walk, we learn to run;" For sure!
Rigoler Avatar
April 24, 2022 at 6:45 PM
Another gem! Love the second stanza in particular. / Maurice
Hankins Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 1:49 PM
What a neat way to illustrate life's circle, Ilene. So true. So observant.
Canerdy Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 1:22 PM
Ilene, your poem is very thoughtful and moving, conveying a message about how small that "circle" is! Janice
Cunningham Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 12:38 PM
It's frightening when you realise that it's not to far away until the circle is completed. Tom
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