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The Circle

We learn to sit and then to crawl Because our view is just too small. From crawling next we start to walk; Confinements only make us balk. Once we can walk, we learn to run; Our exploration has begun And once adulthood is unfurled, We head on out to see the world. The years flash by; our running days Return us to a former phase. Again we walk, with waning pep, Reverting to a slower step. We skip the crawl but soon see fit To find a cozy place to sit And once we’re settled in a seat, We know life’s circle is complete.

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Date: 4/26/2022 12:24:00 AM
This happens way too fast "Once we can walk, we learn to run;" For sure!
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Date: 4/24/2022 6:45:00 PM
Another gem! Love the second stanza in particular. / Maurice
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Date: 4/21/2022 1:49:00 PM
What a neat way to illustrate life's circle, Ilene. So true. So observant.
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Date: 4/21/2022 1:22:00 PM
Ilene, your poem is very thoughtful and moving, conveying a message about how small that "circle" is! Janice
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Date: 4/21/2022 12:38:00 PM
It's frightening when you realise that it's not to far away until the circle is completed. Tom
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