The Church's Wall And Gates Are Broken Down - Nehemiah 1: 11

Considering the church's present plight
the evils of sin have breached the walls
just as it was in Nehemiah's days
we need to learn from Jerusalem's fall

We must see the need of the hour
prayer needs to be our first priority
as Nehemiah mourned for many days
crying to God our supreme authority

The Lord is the great and awesome God
keeping steadfast love to His own
those who keep His commandments
be still and kneel before God's throne

Confess our corrupted heart
which pulls us down away from God
learn to return to your father
abide and keep to God's sword

Lord be attentive to our cries
for we delight to live in godly fear
please bring success to our prayers
thank you for hearing in your ear

(This piece is based on Nehemiah chapter 1.)
(The words of Nehemiah the son of Hacaliah.
Now it happened in the month of Chislev, in the twentieth year, as I was in Susa the citadel,  that Hanani, one of my brothers, came with certain men from Judah. And I asked them concerning the Jews who escaped, who had survived the exile, and concerning Jerusalem.  And they said to me, “The remnant there in the province who had survived the exile is in great trouble and shame. The wall of Jerusalem is broken down, and its gates are destroyed by fire.”
As soon as I heard these words I sat down and wept and mourned for days, and I continued fasting and praying before the God of heaven.  And I said, “O Lord God of heaven, the great and awesome God who keeps covenant and steadfast love with those who love him and keep his commandments,  let your ear be attentive and your eyes open, to hear the prayer of your servant that I now pray before you day and night for the people of Israel your servants, confessing the sins of the people of Israel, which we have sinned against you. Even I and my father's house have sinned.  We have acted very corruptly against you and have not kept the commandments, the statutes, and the rules that you commanded your servant Moses. Remember the word that you commanded your servant Moses, saying, ‘If you are unfaithful, I will scatter you among the peoples,  but if you return to me and keep my commandments and do them, though your outcasts are in the uttermost parts of heaven, from there I will gather them and bring them to the place that I have chosen, to make my name dwell there.’  They are your servants and your people, whom you have redeemed by your great power and by your strong hand.  O Lord, let your ear be attentive to the prayer of your servant, and to the prayer of your servants who delight to fear your name, and give success to your servant today, and grant him mercy in the sight of this man.”
Now I was cupbearer to the king.)

Nehemiah 1: 1-11 (ESV)

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Date: 2/25/2024 8:48:00 AM
Another really truly religous write, which says how great God is He know our deeds and through prayer and fasting perhaps you will hear me, In fact I, your humble servant WHO FASTS AND PRAYS, help us and guide us through this crisis of the fallen Jerusalem wall and the gates that fire has destroyed. Kudos Gordon for you unquestionable faith. Hugs and Blessings, Jennifer.
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 2/25/2024 1:56:00 PM
Thanks again Jennifer, So glad you enjoyed this piece and found it such a truly religious write, hope all is good with you. Blessings always,Gordon
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