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The Christmas Spirit

THE CHRISTMAS SPIRIT

Christmas looks fattened around her
so gaunt
her eyes lift at the treasure of family
a shawl covers the chill
she texts to her cousin, her last
pray for me
This greedy cancer could have erased all this
she grins through gaping teeth
in a sleeping beauty coma, she’d stirred
prayers like incense
continual burning light to God
her only daughter’s married now
what more could she inquire of Him?
a choir sings bright
on the twenty seventh of December
after her last Christmas was spent

AFTERMATH

a doorbell knocks
tablet spills open
in shock
a birthday’s announced
Pam’s first day in heaven

12/5/2018
Dear Heart’s A Sad Christmas Poetry Contest

*true story
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Andresen Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 2:52 AM
- Many factors can make Christmas an extra heavy time, Kim - Congratulations on your winning poem - Merry Christmas to you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 9:53 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 8:12 PM
A blessing, a Christmas miracle to not have to remain suffering. Your ending was beautifully written Kim. Congratulations on your win! xxoo
Rodrigues Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 10:11 PM
Thank you, Connie!
La France Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 6:54 PM
Kim, congratulations on your win in my contest with this emotional write, well done ~
Rodrigues Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 7:10 PM
Thank you, Constance!
Krutsinger Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 1:00 AM
Cancer is such a horrible disease; I wish we could find an inexpensive cure, and years ago. Great poem. Good luck in the contest, Kim.
Cunningham Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 1:02 PM
Sad verse Kim, death at anytime is heartbteaking but more so at Christmas. Good luck. Tom.
Green Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 11:26 AM
Very sad Kim and even sadder that it is a true story though it seems like she was waiting for it and finally found her new place. Nicely done. Best wishes in the contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 11:32 AM
Thank you, Chris!
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