The Christ Child

“This Christ Child” shall the Savior be. 
The animals have come around	
to this mother name of Mary,			
as angels make a joyful sound.	

The animals have come around	
the kings who traveled from far away. 	 
As angels make a joyful sound	
they must leave at the break of day.	

The kings who traveled from far way	
report that danger doth abound.         
They must leave at the break of day.	
Safety from Herod must be found.    .      

Reports that danger doth abound , 
sent to the Earth from Heaven above.	
Safety from Herod must be found,     
warnings for precious Child they love.	

Sent to the Earth from heaven above,    	
to this mother name of Mary		
warnings for precious Child they love.	
This "Christ Child" shall the Savior be.	

By: Joyce Johnson 11/21/10	


Won 5th
For Paula Swanson's contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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January 3, 2011 at 7:16 AM
Joyce am trying to figure out why you was afraid to read my poem. This is a very nice piece as well, well said
Mehta Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 12:31 AM
Many congrats Joyce on winning coveted spot in Paulas Pantoum contest with this beautiful write. Luv/best wishes........Hitendra Mehta
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December 13, 2010 at 11:23 AM
Congratulations on your win Joyce in Paula's Pantoum contest. Love, Carol
Radke Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 4:57 AM
What a beautiful poem. This could be a Christmas carol as it sings from the page so wonderfully. Congratulations on this winning entry in the pantoum contest.
Mannan Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 8:01 PM
A beautiful pantoum. Many congratulations for this win.
Haick Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 12:37 PM
Congratulations on your 5th Place Win, in the contest, Joyce! Enjoy! Love, Audrey
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December 12, 2010 at 11:44 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest..Sara
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December 12, 2010 at 8:29 AM
So happy to see your poem in the winners' circle, Joyce. Congratulations and blessings for the holidays, Carolyn
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December 12, 2010 at 7:20 AM
Congrats Joyce on your winning poem in Paula's Pantoum contest with this vibrant write and win ..enjoy another top ten victory with luv..
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December 12, 2010 at 5:48 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Paula, Joyce
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November 28, 2010 at 9:21 PM
Excellent, you caught the spirit of Christmas and did a great job with the pantoum:)
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November 26, 2010 at 8:20 PM
What a cool way to do the Pantoum, with a very seasonal topic indeed, Joyce. Loved your comment to me on the pants! Luv, Andrea
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November 24, 2010 at 4:46 PM
Such a lovely reflection on the first Christmas, Joyce! Best wishes in Paula's contest. I'm glad you'll be with your daughter on Thanksgiving. I'm celebrating with good friends. No air travel for me, thank you. Some airports are reporting very long delays and people being "groped" by the TSA are missing their flights. There has to be a better way. Have a wonderful holiday, my friend. Love, peace and joy, Carolyn
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November 22, 2010 at 11:01 AM
Very lovely, Joyce..This picture of the Mother of God you've painted for all to see. Her gift she received of "free will" was really invaluable for all of us, today. Much love, Audrey
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November 22, 2010 at 7:09 AM
a gift of words totally divine, joyce... rooting for this one in paula's contest!warmest, nette
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November 22, 2010 at 5:27 AM
Extremely beautiful Joyce .. such lovely sentiments so true and yesterday in our Church we celebrated the feast of Christ the King as a little Child..come to Earth... a wonderful write my friend.. hope u enjoy a very Happy Thanksgiving with luv..
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