The Choice

The World

My work is over time to head on home
Made lots of money trading stocks on-line
I told my secretary she could leave 
Askance my traders quid pro quo was fine 

I entered elevator floor nine-teen
Pushed ground floor button number one then saw
Another door to lift laid opposite
Impossible, turned ready to withdraw

The Devil's Minion

Unable to escape the way I came
The capsule doors on other side agaze
Was drawn out by a large, dark silhouette
Inside a narthex three closed doors ablaze

I listened to malefic force within
Effulgent scuttles have distracted me
With ears submitting to an evil force
On knees established I forlornly see

The Choice

The devil's minion utters chilling words
“You worldly man you face deserving death”
“You will be given one last stabbing choice”
“You get to choose a door with your last breath”

If there's a god I pray you save my soul
The dark and eldritch spirit yield a laugh
He said “each door is named must pick one now”
“Not fair” I said, he showed me golden calf

Door number one depicted the word ME
Door number two was written the word YOU
Door number three aglow with the word HIM
“What in the hell am I supposed to do ?

I looked at evil spirit's saber drawn
With my last breath I ran to a new dawn

_____________________________________________________

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/24/2016 4:07:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative work..This must have been a nightmare..Thanks for the soup mail..Sara
Login to Reply
Carney Avatar
Thomas Carney
Date: 1/26/2016 11:49:00 AM
Thanks Sara. Was not a nightmare for me, but could very well be if I read it too many times...ha ha. Best 2U. Thomas
Date: 9/27/2014 9:49:00 PM
I agree with everything John and Gene had to say! What an interesting and original concept my friend! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Thanks again for your positive comments on a couple of mine. Cheers... Jack
Login to Reply
Carney Avatar
Thomas Carney
Date: 11/17/2014 2:08:00 PM
Of course sir. My main problem now is negotiating my time, and I need to carve more time out here to satisfy my poetic love tank. Reading yours and others, and being able to write a decent poem, keep the tank full. Thomas :)
Date: 8/28/2014 1:14:00 PM
Well written and thought provoking.... Post more and you will develop a following..........Thanks for your comment and welcome to PS...... Jake
Login to Reply
Carney Avatar
Thomas Carney
Date: 8/31/2014 5:38:00 AM
Thanks for reading Jake. I appreciate the ecouragement as well. That's the plan. Over the next couple months I should be posting more often on PS. regards, Thomas
Date: 4/22/2014 2:56:00 AM
Welcome to PS, TC. Perhaps, this could be the reason for the slight feeling of unease on entering elevators. A chilling, original idea having the wall opposite the door open into Hades. Nice Iambic Pentameter with a subject and message that leaves the reader pondering. Is this a dredream or reality. Nice work and look forward to other poems from you. Your P'S friend Gene
Login to Reply
Carney Avatar
Thomas Carney
Date: 1/24/2016 11:57:00 AM
Best to you in 2016 Gene, unless you are in heaven. If so, you beat me there. Save me a place close to the saints. Praise Jesus.
Carney Avatar
Thomas Carney
Date: 2/20/2015 4:14:00 PM
Where are you brother?
Carney Avatar
Thomas Carney
Date: 8/28/2014 1:07:00 PM
Many thanks for your critique and pithy comments Mr. Bourne. "Preciate" you. Thomas
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad