The Chocolate Hills of Bohol

The Chocolate Hills of Bohol
Ancient as creation, true natural wonders, the Chocolate Hills of Bohol teem with singularly exotic flora and fauna, fanciful ferns and big-eyed tarsiers, peculiar primates. Abundant rain wonderfully adorns them with a mantle of verdant fashion; while drought unveils their beautiful brown cloaks, resembling giant delicious chocolate kisses, or sun-baked peanut butter cookies. At dawn, they're subdued by shades of grey and blue; but at dusk, they startle with red-orange hues.
The Chocolate Hills serenely slumber, heavy eyelids closed in peaceful repose. They’re fast asleep and deeply daydreaming, perhaps, of becoming rugged rocky mountains. Finger to lips – shhh – let sleeping hills lie! Hands cover ears - these conical mounds are so clever at keeping hidden secrets. Silent observers, they echo no tales, but hold on to footprints in the limestone soil, discretely recording every visitor, not forgetting anything - remembering all.
8-24-2014 Contest: Poems about Places Sponsor: Charlotte Jade Puddifoot Placement: 4th

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Date: 8/22/2017 12:54:00 AM
Oh! my, my you are indeed blessed with a very descriptive mind set. Very colorful, I assume maybe you've been to many of these places in your life. Simply marvelous you are blessed Write ON James :D
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/22/2017 12:51:00 PM
Thank you so very much for complimenting and encouraging my work! While I have done quite a bit of traveling all over the world, I have not actually yet visited the Philippines, home of these magical hills. Perhaps, I will do so some time next year as my older son has already invited me to take a trip with him! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 9/13/2014 12:30:00 PM
A great write and win my friend. My wife is from Cebu and insists the next time we go to her parents home in the Philippines that WE go see The Chocolate Hills. She has been there a few times but myself only heard about the beautiful scenery there. Now thanks to your beautiful poem have read about it too..
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 9/13/2014 3:03:00 PM
Robert, I am oh so delighted to hear about your personal connection to this part of the world! Yes, you must visit there, my friend! I am sure that you will have a memorable visit with your wife! Thank you for letting me know about this! Pandita
Date: 9/10/2014 10:40:00 AM
powerful and full originality !
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 9/10/2014 10:56:00 AM
Thank you so very much for complimenting my work - so happy that you enjoyed it! Pandita
Date: 8/31/2014 3:08:00 PM
hey, Pandita. So glad to see you made this particular winners list. I think I got halfway down the list and forgot to see the other winners!! Congrats on a well deserved win.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/31/2014 6:02:00 PM
Thanks very much, Andrea! I always appreciate your compliments! Pandita
Date: 8/31/2014 1:48:00 AM
Beautiful personification Pandita. Congrats on winning in Charlotte's contest. Verlena
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/31/2014 3:31:00 AM
Thank you so much, my friend, for your special compliments! I learn from poets of your caliber. Thank you for encouraging and supporting me! Pandita
Date: 8/29/2014 8:14:00 PM
I just knew this was going to do well..Wonderful win...Congrats. BG
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/29/2014 8:55:00 PM
Hi Barbara, thank you for the vote of confidence and always for your kind comments! Have a great weekend! Pandita
Date: 8/29/2014 8:00:00 PM
Beautiful write, Pandita! Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Kika
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/29/2014 8:51:00 PM
Kika, thank you for complimenting my work - glad that you enjoyed it! Pandita
Date: 8/29/2014 7:23:00 PM
some beautiful description in this one, sumptuous phrasing, really brings the place to colourful life; I love that line "finger to lips..." - congrats on your win in my contest! :)
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/29/2014 8:48:00 PM
Charlotte, I thank you kindly for granting me a placement in your contest. It means a lot to me. Thanks again! Pandita
Date: 8/29/2014 7:23:00 PM
Gorgeous, Pandita. I love your description...makes me wish our mountains were chocolate. Congratulations.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/29/2014 8:50:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Faye. Yes, as a fellow chocolate lover, that would be a dream come true:-)! Pandita
Date: 8/26/2014 5:02:00 PM
The mystery landscapes hold is truly endless, thank you for taking me here. Light & Love
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/26/2014 9:07:00 PM
Thank you so much Debbie for complimenting this piece. I am really happy that you liked it. Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 8/25/2014 9:13:00 AM
Been to this place, Pandita! awesome to behold so is your write!!! :))
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/25/2014 1:40:00 PM
Hi hija, I am so glad that you have visited this area before and was able to experience its beauty! I am also happy that I chose to highlight this amazing place. Thank you so much for the sweet compliments! Pandita
Date: 8/25/2014 9:09:00 AM
This is cool poetry! I live in the Philippines and I have not been to Bohol to see the Chocolate Hills myself. You just made me interested in visiting the place some time in the near future! :)
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/25/2014 1:38:00 PM
Hi Markee, I appreciate your kind compliments and I am so happy that this piece has inspired you to visit Bohol! I am sure that you will enjoy it very much, my friend! Pandita
Date: 8/25/2014 8:06:00 AM
this is such a cool poem the way you related its formations to many kinds of sweets . Awesome symbolism! IS there a chocolate poem going on somewhere. I see someone talking about a contest down here and I am seeing chocolate poems!!!
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/25/2014 1:36:00 PM
Andrea, thank you so much for complimenting this piece. I don't think there is a contest on "chocolate" per se; this is an entry for the "Poems about Places" contest. But perhaps, the other chocolate poems are connected to the "Addiction" contest??? Or maybe poets are just in a "chocolate frame of mind"-LOL!
Date: 8/25/2014 6:20:00 AM
Oh my, you've got a gem here...should do very well in the contest. Now I have to go find out more about these hill of yours. BG
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Date: 8/25/2014 6:49:00 AM
Thank you so very much Barbara for your kind compliments. Yes, these hills in the Philippines are indeed uniquely beautiful! Warmest regards. Pandita
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