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The Chlorophyll Moments

It is the moment of chlorophyll as you make oxygen

Inviting in my dull leaves the green dance back again

Birds meet in huge pleasure as in joy smiles the grain

The cloud says, one moment, I am coming in the rain
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12/04/2017
Note: It appears that oxygen doesn't rhyme with again 
Grain etc. On this understanding, the poem is withdrawn
From the contest. Sorry ...

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/15/2017 9:17:00 AM

A lovely nature poem, Probir, contest or not:)

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/16/2017 7:35:00 AM

Right ... Thank you ...

Jan Allison

Date: 4/12/2017 11:01:00 AM

I am sure you can tweak the first line to get it to rhyme Probir:-) a delight to read you today:-) hugs Jan xx

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/13/2017 8:14:00 AM

Yes, I could do but chose not to because the line seemed irreplaceable given the context ... glad you like the poem ... Thank you ...

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/12/2017 9:13:00 AM

:) Nature sings with you, Probir. Good luck in the contest.

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/12/2017 9:21:00 AM

Thank you, Eileen for liking ... I have since withdrawn it from the contest ... I am in doubt regarding the rhyming with oxygen and have added a note accordingly ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/12/2017 7:45:00 AM

Your poem made me, my smile to sustain dear, Probir! Marvelous and a 7!

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/12/2017 9:23:00 AM

Thank you ... We know you live with chlorophylls!