Probir Gupta Poet Monorhyme

The Chlorophyll Moments

It is the moment of chlorophyll as you make oxygen

Inviting in my dull leaves the green dance back again

Birds meet in huge pleasure as in joy smiles the grain

The cloud says, one moment, I am coming in the rain
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12/04/2017
Note: It appears that oxygen doesn't rhyme with again 
Grain etc. On this understanding, the poem is withdrawn
From the contest. Sorry ...

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Joanna Daniel April 15, 2017 at 9:17 AM A lovely nature poem, Probir, contest or not:) Probir Gupta April 16, 2017 at 7:35 AM Right ... Thank you ...

Jan Allison April 12, 2017 at 11:01 AM I am sure you can tweak the first line to get it to rhyme Probir:-) a delight to read you today:-) hugs Jan xx Probir Gupta April 13, 2017 at 8:14 AM Yes, I could do but chose not to because the line seemed irreplaceable given the context ... glad you like the poem ... Thank you ...

Eileen Manassian April 12, 2017 at 9:13 AM :) Nature sings with you, Probir. Good luck in the contest. Probir Gupta April 12, 2017 at 9:21 AM Thank you, Eileen for liking ... I have since withdrawn it from the contest ... I am in doubt regarding the rhyming with oxygen and have added a note accordingly ...

Demetrios Trifiatis April 12, 2017 at 7:45 AM Your poem made me, my smile to sustain dear, Probir! Marvelous and a 7! Probir Gupta April 12, 2017 at 9:23 AM Thank you ... We know you live with chlorophylls!