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The Chimney That Kris Missed

The kids were all ready for Christmas While under the tree sat their wish lists-- Heard a big rumble From a big tumble-- Seems it was the chimney that Kris missed They ran out to see the commotion Witnessed Santa downing a potion-- Their eyes grew so wide That in came the tide-- Their gifts floated in on the ocean!

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Charles Messina

Date: 12/2/2018 8:03:00 PM

I hope the kids all got surfboards...lol Congrats on your win, Gershon....Charlie

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/3/2018 7:15:00 PM

How did you know?! What with global warming and climate change, snowboards are out of favor these days... ~ gw

Jan Allison

Date: 12/2/2018 4:27:00 PM

Dropping back to say many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/2/2018 6:48:00 PM

Much appreciated, Jan! Best of the season! ~ Gershon

Tania Kitchin

Date: 12/2/2018 2:07:00 PM

Ha ha, very funny and clever!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/2/2018 6:48:00 PM

Glad you liked it, Tania! :) gw

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/2/2018 11:50:00 AM

LOL I could just see this happening, Gershon. Just imagine a tipsy Santa trying to explain to children why their gifts were "floating" instead of laying underneath their trees. Congratulations on your placement. Competition for this contest was awesome and you did a great job. Thanks for supporting the contest with you witty verse.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/2/2018 6:48:00 PM

Thank you so much for taking the time to comment, and special thanks for sponsoring this wonderful contest, Carolyn. Best of the season to you and yours! ~ Gershon

Jan Allison

Date: 11/29/2018 7:47:00 AM

Very funny indeed Gershon! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/2/2018 1:03:00 PM

Your wishes worked (3rd Place). Thank you, my good luck charm! :) gw