Get Your Premium Membership

The Chimney

The chimney now stands alone Without the home that was filled with love A relic of what once had been gone All the children left for places unkown Father left many years ago for above The chimney now stands alone It once radiated warmth from its stones As mother cooked meals unconceived of A relic of what once had been gone The chimney now stands alone Once it glowed with warmth that was made use of Family gathered around, sweet potatoes thrown In the ashes and coals, now the family is unknown They're gone to different parts of the world, deprived of A relic of what once had been gone Children studied lessons once by the flame Now no one even knows any of their names The chimney now stands alone A relic of what once had been gone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/3/2009 4:46:00 AM
Thanks for the comments. I love this one especially! Take care-
Login to Reply
Date: 9/30/2009 2:34:00 PM
Hi Sara, A tell tale chimney,how beautiful your poetry is?.Memories and memories the chimney flashes through your mind .This takes every reader through the same memory lane,very sensational.I enjoyed this better .Best wishes!. Chacko
Login to Reply
Date: 9/30/2009 1:52:00 PM
I agree with Carolyn, both are well written and you can picture the family living therfe >> James
Login to Reply
Date: 9/29/2009 12:48:00 PM
Sara, I think this generates a feeling similar to the one created by "The Relic." I don't think there's a way to say one is better than the other. Both are very well done! Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 9/29/2009 9:30:00 AM
Oh Sara a sad but yet beautiful poem you have presented here for us to read. I enjoyed the read and it brought back many memories of time long past. Thank you. Thank you also for your very kind comments today. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 9/29/2009 12:33:00 AM
As always I enjoyed this wonderful write.... Hey there is a new poem #19 of my thoughts you may enjoy.....Again, your poetry is a must read daily...Keep it up......:JP}
Login to Reply
Date: 9/28/2009 11:33:00 PM
very beautiful indeed.............kate
Login to Reply
Date: 9/28/2009 9:15:00 PM
I see these studding long-abandoned farms in deepest Minnesota....must stop and photo more....thanks, Sara, enjoyed this... jim
Login to Reply
Date: 9/28/2009 5:55:00 PM
Very Nice... and Historic, for so many cultures and peoples around the Globe... The Picture was painted well... and shows us, we better be grateful for every moment of our lives together... Well and beautifully Worded MoonBee
Login to Reply
Date: 9/28/2009 5:55:00 PM
Beautiful imaginative here Sara, the warm stones that surely warmed many heart with the home fire of love. God bless, Sincerely Moses
Login to Reply
Date: 9/28/2009 3:46:00 PM
The hearth of the home....there is something so comforting about it! ~ Carrie
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs