The Chimney

The chimney now stands alone
Without the home that was filled with love
A relic of what once had been gone

All the children left for places unkown
Father left many years ago for above
The chimney now stands alone

It once radiated warmth from its stones
As mother cooked meals unconceived of
A relic of what once had been gone

The chimney now stands alone 
Once it glowed with warmth that was made use of
Family gathered around, sweet potatoes thrown

In the ashes and coals, now the family is unknown
They're gone to different parts of the world, deprived of
A relic of what once had been gone

Children studied lessons once by the flame
Now no one even knows any of their names
The chimney now stands alone
A relic of what once had been gone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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T. Avatar
October 3, 2009 at 4:46 AM
Thanks for the comments. I love this one especially! Take care-
Itticheria Avatar
September 30, 2009 at 2:34 PM
Hi Sara, A tell tale chimney,how beautiful your poetry is?.Memories and memories the chimney flashes through your mind .This takes every reader through the same memory lane,very sensational.I enjoyed this better .Best wishes!. Chacko
Fraser Avatar
September 30, 2009 at 1:52 PM
I agree with Carolyn, both are well written and you can picture the family living therfe >> James
Devonshire Avatar
September 29, 2009 at 12:48 PM
Sara, I think this generates a feeling similar to the one created by "The Relic." I don't think there's a way to say one is better than the other. Both are very well done! Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
September 29, 2009 at 9:30 AM
Oh Sara a sad but yet beautiful poem you have presented here for us to read. I enjoyed the read and it brought back many memories of time long past. Thank you. Thank you also for your very kind comments today. Love, Carol
Pickett Avatar
September 29, 2009 at 12:33 AM
As always I enjoyed this wonderful write.... Hey there is a new poem #19 of my thoughts you may enjoy.....Again, your poetry is a must read daily...Keep it up......:JP}
W Avatar
September 28, 2009 at 11:33 PM
very beautiful indeed.............kate
Goff Avatar
September 28, 2009 at 9:15 PM
I see these studding long-abandoned farms in deepest Minnesota....must stop and photo more....thanks, Sara, enjoyed this... jim
Freeman Avatar
September 28, 2009 at 5:55 PM
Beautiful imaginative here Sara, the warm stones that surely warmed many heart with the home fire of love. God bless, Sincerely Moses
Canady Avatar
September 28, 2009 at 5:55 PM
Very Nice... and Historic, for so many cultures and peoples around the Globe... The Picture was painted well... and shows us, we better be grateful for every moment of our lives together... Well and beautifully Worded MoonBee
Richards Avatar
September 28, 2009 at 3:46 PM
The hearth of the home....there is something so comforting about it! ~ Carrie
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