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Contest : Sijo of Good Measure

Sponsored by : Hilo Poet

Dated : November 29, 2025

Premiere Contest WinnerThe Child In Me


From the yonder hazy horizon, the hills painted blue undulated down the emerald copious landscape in rhapsodic rhythmic waves that cascaded still into my view. Its curling contours carved for my hamlet a serene shape, That once cradled my endearing home in quiet milieu in the bounty of the beguiling nature that made me agape. The fairy flotilla of cotton clouds I would see roam, make the mesmeric celestial panorama framed high upon the seamlessly curved canvas of the cerulean dome. With the serenading winds whistling in the sapphire sky, my childhood ebullience soared secretly to a great height, followed the winding trails of the colorful kites I loved to fly. A silvery stream glided with the sparkle of delight, surging joy with the shimmering allure of liquid pearls, flowed blissfully with the flamboyant façade forever so bright. On its rippling waters swirling within the gentle whirl, I sailed paper boats tinted with all the rainbow colors, saw fascinated these glide away wobbling in the current’s curl. These sailed to a distant fantasy land, where I didn’t know, I imagined entranced by the charm of infantile dreams, on these spectacular boats my mariner mind would someday go. From obscurity all these boats and kites I can’t redeem, for in the twilight zone with dust of time they’ve disappeared beyond the horizon that is sinking now with the dusky gleam. The fondest childhood memory hasn’t yet deserted me, for crossing all the signposts in my walk of the last mile in the glitter of the sunset hours the child in me I still see.
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Ray Choudhury Avatar
December 18, 2025 at 6:59 PM
Congratulations! A fine poem with unforgettable memories of childhood - your descriptive vocabulary and images amaze me! Look forward to reading more and more ~ Mala
Ray Choudhury Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 10:49 AM
This poem is going to my favourite list - it's a masterpiece. I often read your poems - I have so much to learn from you. Happy New Year to you and family.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 18, 2025 at 10:49 PM
Thank you so much for your read and for your gracious comments that encourages me. Hope you are doing well. Best wishes for the New Year.
Brul Avatar
December 8, 2025 at 5:34 AM
One of the finest poems I’ve read this 2025. Congratulations! A fav^___^
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 3:15 AM
Thank you so much, JCB. I am elated by your commrnt and for faving the poem. Best wishes
C. Joshua  Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 2:39 PM
Aptly penned, succinctly said. Congratulations on your win.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 3:16 AM
Thank you so much for your read and wonderful comments.
Peck Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 11:36 AM
Dear Subimal, I Just read your lovely winning poem. I especially loved your last stanza. I think we are all still children at heart.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 3:17 AM
Thank you so much for your read and wonderful comments. Yes, we are, thankfully.
George Avatar
November 29, 2025 at 12:25 AM
Flying kites and setting sail paper boats in the puddles and river water are pastimes for every child. Even in twilight years such memories pop up in the mind occasionally, though many are buried in oblivion. Beautiful poem in lovely rhyme.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 29, 2025 at 1:19 AM
Yes, childhood memories are priceless. Thank you for your read and comment.
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