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The Chihuahua's Story

The tiny black Chihuahua dressed in her red collar Followed her mistress in her red dress and umbrella Pouring rain didn't matter, just cell phone's caller The man in dark suit and coat said, "Ciao bella.". As the rain ends, petrichor begins To stimulate olfactory nerves Mine will delight, aroma wins I will sniff the scents, prance my verve My mistress' date first noticed Her callipygian formed curves At first her kind spirit unnoticed Nor her good traits he observed Her fragrance of sweet gardenia Her hair of a golden dark hue Asking he learned her name, Denia Found she had good traits not a few I'm glad I followed her in the rain The surroundings neat and so clean Such warm greeting, his intent not feign But standing in rain, I'm not keen
Finis' Written: Wednesday and Thursday, November 07-08, 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
November 20, 2018 at 12:34 PM
this was sure cute. Somehow I missed seeing it earlier. Loved the doggie in there.
Kendrick Avatar
November 21, 2018 at 7:48 AM
Andrea, Thanks for visiting my page. I left off the word red in front of the umbrella but I thought that the red in front of the dress was understood to mean red umbrella also. Live and learn. Sara
Roper Avatar
November 15, 2018 at 7:48 AM
Great imagery and I can visualize the whole picture..
Horne Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 2:47 PM
awww, this is lovely - I was expecting to hear about a naughty hairy chihuahua who bit people under the umbrella!!!!
Kendrick Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 3:05 PM
Jack, I think this Chihuahua is a very good natured one like Princess. Hairy bit me today. It did hurt. He can be very bad sometimes. Thanks for all the visits to my page. Sara
Andresen Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 4:03 AM
- A beautifully described poem, Sara :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 8:36 AM
SS, Thanks for dropping by and the kind review of my work. I appreciate your presence at my work. Sara
Gauthier Avatar
November 7, 2018 at 2:43 PM
Love this charming imagery and story. Well done, Sara.
Kendrick Avatar
November 7, 2018 at 5:10 PM
Line, Thanks for the visit to my page. I appreciate you stopping by. Your presence and comments are uplifting. Sara
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