The Chihuahua's Story

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The tiny black Chihuahua dressed in her red collar Followed her mistress in her red dress and umbrella Pouring rain didn't matter, just cell phone's caller The man in dark suit and coat said, "Ciao bella.". As the rain ends, petrichor begins To stimulate olfactory nerves Mine will delight, aroma wins I will sniff the scents, prance my verve My mistress' date first noticed Her callipygian formed curves At first her kind spirit unnoticed Nor her good traits he observed Her fragrance of sweet gardenia Her hair of a golden dark hue Asking he learned her name, Denia Found she had good traits not a few I'm glad I followed her in the rain The surroundings neat and so clean Such warm greeting, his intent not feign But standing in rain, I'm not keen
Finis' Written: Wednesday and Thursday, November 07-08, 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 11/20/2018 12:34:00 PM
this was sure cute. Somehow I missed seeing it earlier. Loved the doggie in there.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/21/2018 7:48:00 AM
Andrea, Thanks for visiting my page. I left off the word red in front of the umbrella but I thought that the red in front of the dress was understood to mean red umbrella also. Live and learn. Sara
Date: 11/15/2018 7:48:00 AM
Great imagery and I can visualize the whole picture..
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Date: 11/9/2018 2:47:00 PM
awww, this is lovely - I was expecting to hear about a naughty hairy chihuahua who bit people under the umbrella!!!!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/9/2018 3:05:00 PM
Jack, I think this Chihuahua is a very good natured one like Princess. Hairy bit me today. It did hurt. He can be very bad sometimes. Thanks for all the visits to my page. Sara
Date: 11/8/2018 4:03:00 AM
- A beautifully described poem, Sara :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/8/2018 8:36:00 AM
SS, Thanks for dropping by and the kind review of my work. I appreciate your presence at my work. Sara
Date: 11/7/2018 2:43:00 PM
Love this charming imagery and story. Well done, Sara.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/7/2018 5:10:00 PM
Line, Thanks for the visit to my page. I appreciate you stopping by. Your presence and comments are uplifting. Sara
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