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The Cherry Sun and I

In skies of blue, oh what a sight! The cherry sun hung very bright, my eyes closed basking in its light, my cheeks burned from its fiery bite. Its hot rays wrapped me from behind. Soaked in sweat, our bodies aligned, and our spirits were now entwined. In its warm arms, I was spelled binned. In abruptness, the heavens cried. Dejected, I heavily sighed, watching the dark clouds be a guide, leading the sun away to hide. Bidding farewell, I left its sight, before the day turned into night.

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Date: 4/10/2024 12:57:00 AM
A very nice poem, it sounds warm and cosy. Am a sufferer of hay fever and get migrain I like the sun but have to sit in a shady place of the garden. Still enjoying the rays without getting unwell.
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Date: 3/28/2024 10:35:00 AM
Very nice Alayah...a tryst before dark. Quite nice! Congratulations! :)
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Alayah Barton
Date: 3/28/2024 11:52:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 3/28/2024 4:19:00 AM
Alayah, this is so beautiful. A wonderful poem! Congratulations on your 1st place win in my contest. Blessings Charlie
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Alayah Barton
Date: 3/28/2024 11:52:00 AM
Thank you so much! I am thrilled and deeply honored that my poem has been awarded 1st place in your poetry contest.
Date: 2/10/2024 5:01:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Alayah Barton
Date: 3/28/2024 11:53:00 AM
Thank you for the warm welcome!

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