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The Cheater That He Is

Passion made its case No time for contemplation Full steam ahead, that new infatuation Two bodies blended sweetly But the body tricks the mind Somewhere along a heart was left behind But he was so alluring Like magnets, his brown eyes And a smile that could hide a million lies And in that cheaters bottle Was the antidote to guilt So numb until the morning it was spilled When the sun illuminated The unfaithful things he did He finally caught a glimpse of what he is By: Kyle Ezra Kriticos

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/18/2012 1:36:00 PM
Amazing poem! Love it!!;)
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Date: 10/2/2012 11:16:00 AM
I'm visualizing the film with the cheater's bottle and the antidote to guilt...Wow! Strongly expressive, though very simply exposed with so plain words! And that rhythm! Great work indeed...:) Hanitra
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Date: 8/31/2012 5:33:00 PM
Ah, lover boy being true to form, too bad we get snared and then find out.
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