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The Chaos in my Heart

A gift of perpetual silence, from a deafening scornful frequency; Eternal tranquility, we chase, so is it considered victory? Victorious it must feel, for the one who departs abrupt; In the halt prior to mine, leaving a chaos in my heart.

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Date: 4/24/2025 1:29:00 PM
Congratulations on placing in my contest. I enjoyed the query in your writing. A truly impactful poem that flows gorgeously. Thank you for writing.
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Date: 4/26/2025 7:52:00 AM
Thank you so much, I appreciate...hope you have a great day ahead ~~

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