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The Changing Sky

Dawn arrives with hues of peach As sunbeams through my window reach Clouds sail by, there's a shape in each Sunset hues of tangerine Paints the day's ending scene As sun and sea convene The sun has lost its crown As twilight begins to pull the curtain down Luna will soon come around A glowing sphere is on the rise Luna rules the night skies Accompanied by her starry allies

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/8/2024 2:54:00 AM

Marvellous vision of sunset. Loved it.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/7/2024 10:55:00 PM

A picturesque poem of night and day. Thanks for this good read.

Silent One

Date: 2/7/2024 12:44:00 PM

You created a wonderful image here.. this is lovely..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/7/2024 5:31:00 AM

Splendid imagery Joseph on the cusp of twilight--delightful as the changing sky you describe -chasing starry night.

Maria Williams

Date: 2/7/2024 2:13:00 AM

What a beautiful picture you paint Joseph. I can just visualize it all. Hugs

Hiya Sharma

Date: 2/6/2024 6:46:00 PM

Oh my, what a majestic poem this is, dear Joseph.. Feels like a celestial celebration of cosmic elements!! I love your wordplay throughout and your impeccable way of conveying the scenes, especially "Sunset hues of tangerine", "As sun and sea convene" and "The sun has lost its crown As twilight begins to pull the curtain down Luna will soon come around" Wow, your wordsmithery is profound here.. Absolutely stunning, loved reading this. Sending many best wishes and light!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/6/2024 5:36:00 PM

outstanding imagery, Joseph, and a delightful read for me this evening. You've truly captured the essence of the ever-changing sky. Wishing you a pleasant evening, Sara

Karen Jones

Date: 2/6/2024 3:31:00 PM

Beautiful imagery and lovely rhyme!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 2/6/2024 1:16:00 PM

While twilight pulls the curtain down, clouds sail by and there's a shape in each. Such a beautiful image to behold. I love everything about ' the changing sky. ' Your thoughts bring a smile, Joseph. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Ink Empress

Date: 2/6/2024 12:30:00 PM

Ah i love luna! And how creative is this poem: i love how this flows in such a melodious cadence and the way youve painted imagery is also so very artistic. Pleasure reading your work always dear joseph