The Changing Sky

 Dawn arrives with hues of peach
 As sunbeams through my window reach
 Clouds sail by, there's a shape in each

 Sunset hues of tangerine
 Paints the day's ending scene
 As sun and sea convene

 The sun has lost its crown
 As twilight begins to pull the curtain down
 Luna will soon come around

 A glowing sphere is on the rise
 Luna rules the night skies
 Accompanied by her starry allies
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Buhagiar Avatar
February 8, 2024 at 2:54 AM
Marvellous vision of sunset. Loved it.
Greenhough Avatar
February 7, 2024 at 10:55 PM
A picturesque poem of night and day. Thanks for this good read.
One Avatar
February 7, 2024 at 12:44 PM
You created a wonderful image here.. this is lovely..
Pandit Avatar
February 7, 2024 at 5:31 AM
Splendid imagery Joseph on the cusp of twilight--delightful as the changing sky you describe -chasing starry night.
Williams Avatar
February 7, 2024 at 2:13 AM
What a beautiful picture you paint Joseph. I can just visualize it all. Hugs
Sharma  Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 6:46 PM
Oh my, what a majestic poem this is, dear Joseph.. Feels like a celestial celebration of cosmic elements!! I love your wordplay throughout and your impeccable way of conveying the scenes, especially "Sunset hues of tangerine", "As sun and sea convene" and "The sun has lost its crown As twilight begins to pull the curtain down Luna will soon come around" Wow, your wordsmithery is profound here.. Absolutely stunning, loved reading this. Sending many best wishes and light!
Jones Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 3:31 PM
Beautiful imagery and lovely rhyme!
Nicole Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 1:16 PM
While twilight pulls the curtain down, clouds sail by and there's a shape in each. Such a beautiful image to behold. I love everything about ' the changing sky. ' Your thoughts bring a smile, Joseph. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Empress Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 12:30 PM
Ah i love luna! And how creative is this poem: i love how this flows in such a melodious cadence and the way youve painted imagery is also so very artistic. Pleasure reading your work always dear joseph
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