Pratidhwani Biswal Poet Blank verse

The Change

I don't know where I'm
I don't know where I'm going to be
Time has changed
So has the people around.

Reached a place far away
Away from home, away from reality
Where my wishes are completed
My incomplete life got its meaning.

Imagination leads my way
Smiles that keep on coming
Oh yaa I think to myself
Whats for tomorrow who knows.

A shattered life it was
Gathered the pieces again
Have decided to walk again
For a miles, till I reach far away.

A door of destiny
Far away from failure and pain
The pearls that shine
Whenever I walk on that way.

Maybe its the end
End of all my tears
The happiness that awaits
In some corner of my heart.

Don't know where I'm 
Don't know where I'm going to be
Time has changed
So has the people around.

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Bl Devnath April 15, 2016 at 7:35 AM Beautiful poem my lovely friend beautifully expressed. Loved always, bl

Manmath Dalei April 3, 2016 at 8:46 PM Very impressive creation. Keep writing....... Pratidhwani Biswal April 4, 2016 at 11:17 AM Thank you for visiting my poems...

Anand Parmale March 26, 2016 at 11:00 PM loved this one....Sounds like a gazal to me....Awesome awesome..... Pratidhwani Biswal March 26, 2016 at 11:20 PM Thank you soo much... It maybe a gazal... I am not thorough with forms of poetry... Thank you...

Skat A March 26, 2016 at 2:54 AM Pratidhwani Biswal,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT Pratidhwani Biswal March 26, 2016 at 3:28 AM Thank you... I am from India... I have been writing poems since 3 years...

Poet Destroyer A March 25, 2016 at 5:38 PM If only you'd post more today, I'd come rushing to read your poetic ways....Linda Pratidhwani Biswal March 25, 2016 at 10:44 PM I will... Definitely...

Poet Destroyer A March 25, 2016 at 1:48 PM Pratidhwani, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@ Pratidhwani Biswal March 25, 2016 at 2:12 PM I went through your poems... Its really filled with lots of emotion and pain... I like such kinds of poems a lot... You are a beautiful poet... Thank u for your encouraging words... It means a lot to me... About my poetic skills, I have been writing since 3 years. I love writing poems a lot. I never tried publishing them. This is the first time I tried. Hope I will learn a lot from you all... Thank you for your support.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 25, 2016 at 1:39 PM - Hey Pratidhwani - I would first wish you warm welcome to Poetry Soup :) - Hope you will find this page friendly and informative :) - Thanks for your first poem, I enjoy reading it :) - // Anne-Lise :) Pratidhwani Biswal March 25, 2016 at 2:09 PM Thank you soo much... Your poems are wonderful...