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The Champion's Fated Fall

It was terrible, and then it stopped; A thunderous downpour of rain. As though a hammer had been dropped, The sky lashed out in pain! A thunderous downpour of rain, A bolt of lightning pierced the air, The sky lashed out in pain And left the warlord lying there. A bolt of lightning pierced the air. It dealt our champion sudden death And left the warlord lying there Gasping for his final breath. It dealt our champion sudden death As though a hammer had been dropped. Gasping for his final breath; It was terrible. And then it stopped! Pantoum Form For the “AND THEN IT STOPPED” contest Sponsored by John Lawless July 5, 2017

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Date: 7/9/2017 6:36:00 AM
Back to say congratulations, Dean on your win:)
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Date: 7/8/2017 8:46:00 AM
It's an effort to write this form so that it makes sense throughout and you've accomplished that to perfection. Well done, Dean.
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Date: 7/8/2017 7:59:00 AM
GOOD pantoum, Dean! Congrats on your win! Janice
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Date: 7/8/2017 7:58:00 AM
Way to go Dean.....I love a well written Pantoum. The repetition was un-noticiable and flowed easily....thanks for entering the contest
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Date: 7/6/2017 9:30:00 AM
This is really good, pantoum, Dean. These are fun to read and to write:) Dood luck!
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Dean Wood
Date: 7/6/2017 9:32:00 AM
Thanks Daniel. I agree. I am not sure what it is about this form but they are a lot of fun to write. - Dean

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