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The Chain

Perhaps we should sit in fields of mud to remember that nothing will always remain. Perhaps we should look into the night sky and see dots of history twinkle to realise that nothing’s the same. Perhaps we should walk the path of our saviour to feel the pain. Perhaps the path of our enemy is much closer to our own domain. Perhaps we should demand to see in the mind of our creator to see the long game. Perhaps we should be kind to each other to break the chain.

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Date: 8/9/2023 12:10:00 AM
Yes, kindness makes such a big difference. A good poem. Well done.
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Date: 5/24/2023 4:59:00 AM
Some great thoughts you have penned in this one. Kindness plus love is the key to winning the world over to a better way. When I was reading this, I was reminded of the song, "Jesus Walked This Lonesome Valley". Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 5/31/2023 1:55:00 PM
Hi Sara, Thanks for your comments. I’m glad you enjoyed it. Cheers.

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