The Cerise Imposture

Crimson rose you bloom and grow
Fragrant and free you open toward light
Though your life lingers so brief
Your beauty reaches me bright 
Tempted I am to reach over and pinch 
Your thorns surprise me by an inch
and clinched my jaw shut 
For you pierced my finger 
For but a moment the pain will linger 
Trickle crimson upon my thumb
wrapped it tight as a drum 
I walk away and admire from far
Your thorns remind me who you are
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Yamin Avatar
December 22, 2008 at 11:58 AM
Laura, Congrats on your poem winning the finals. Well deserved win. Best wishes. -Moammad
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November 30, 2008 at 7:24 AM
Dear Laura - These two poems were brilliant! Congratulations on your 2 poems making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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November 4, 2008 at 11:47 PM
Laura - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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October 27, 2008 at 5:56 AM
Warmest congrats Laura on making it through the first round! Good luck! Love, Shar
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October 27, 2008 at 1:14 AM
Congrats on your success in PS contest,best wishes for next round Laura Rgds Brian & thanks for support for my contests
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October 5, 2008 at 6:05 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured. This is an excellent poem. I like the flow of the words and the descriptiveness embedded therein. Great job! ~Joseph
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October 4, 2008 at 6:46 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Congrats on your feature this week Laura.Rgds Brian
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September 24, 2008 at 4:58 PM
Congratulations on YOUR Featured POEM of the week "The cerise imposture" blood is LOVE pain is sweet perfectly worded SUPERB I want to enter YOURmembers contest but I don't think I will I could not reachYOUR expectations My Wife and fellow POETS are my inspiration for my writes When I can Write as well as YOU I will be fulfilled YOUR LIEGE...HG
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September 24, 2008 at 7:22 AM
Every Rose has a thorn. A unique way of protecting beauty. Congratulations Laura on "The Cerise Imposture" being featured. God Bless. Vince
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September 22, 2008 at 4:05 PM
Congratulations on having this beauty featured. The last line brings so much depth to this poem. Well done. Regards Heidie
Jordan Avatar
September 22, 2008 at 7:38 AM
Laura this poem is just amazing - Loved how it ended in reflection - God bles & congrats on being featured
Winter Avatar
September 22, 2008 at 7:06 AM
Congratulations Laura on your beautiful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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September 22, 2008 at 7:05 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week.Laura.RgdsBrian
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