The Center of Spring

This is perhaps the most powerful day, 
early spring giving way to the main course, 
the trees hastily bursting their buds, 
blooming in reds, oranges and yellows - 
the reflection of the opposite season, 
now with the addition of white, 
white as the clouds above, 
which can't bring themselves to look like winter clouds anymore - 
they lie in the blue air 
watching the nymphs and pixies flit through the flowering trees, 
they ride high above lawn and pasture; 
clouds are the smiling souls of sheep, 
sheep from far off and long ago, 
remembering when they were lambs at play, 
now looking down upon the new fields, 
fields that bear witness to the raging torrent of unleashed energy - 
this is Mother Nature going all in, 
both her feet upon the accelerator of change, 
lighting the afterburners with one hand while making a fist with the other,
shaking it at Old Man Winter, 
just daring him to give it one more try before October, 
that next October when the grass will be tired, 
when the tone of light and the shade of sound slow down, 
when the clouds will remember how to look like they're in cold air.

For now, the grass shines into your mind - 
that's what tells you it's that powerful day of spring, 
that special green color, 
deeper, fuller, richer, vibrant and electrifying, 
it races to your eye and fills you. 
Mother Nature twirls in the upsurge of growth - 
she can hear it, and you can see it and smell it - 
and if you get close enough you can touch it, 
blade of grass, leaf of clover, 
and you're there with all the wee beasties of the yard and garden, 
feeling what spring really is - 
all life turning its face to the sun and jumping up and down.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 8/30/2017 4:42:00 PM
This is amazing!...... Good job!
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Doug Vinson
Date: 8/31/2017 9:37:00 AM
Thank you, Adeyemi. Quite a different feel right now in the northern hemisphere - summer going into its old age.
Date: 3/13/2017 12:01:00 AM
A feel good, uplifting all around happy piece..hello spring! Beautiful writing. I especially like the imagery in the line "watching the nymphs and pixies flit through the flowering trees.":-) Magical! A lovely poem, a joy to read. blessings, lynn
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Doug Vinson
Date: 3/14/2017 9:00:00 PM
Thanks, Lynn. Ah, the seasons...
Date: 12/4/2016 2:34:00 AM
Nice, Doug. Sounds especially good this time of year.
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Doug Vinson
Date: 12/4/2016 8:42:00 AM
Yah, for sure... : )
Date: 11/30/2016 12:06:00 PM
This poem is a pleasant and will written.Just reading it relaxes me. It makes me think of the comfort And peacefulness spring brings and how much dread winter and the unwanted snow it brings.
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Doug Vinson
Date: 11/30/2016 12:24:00 PM
Hi Candace. That really makes me feel good. : ) And - have to laugh - just this morning I was thinking about the oncoming winter, dirty snowpiles, vehicles all messed up and nasty with ice and salt, hands hurting in the cold, defrost time increased fourfold... Oh heck I still feel good. : P
Date: 11/29/2016 10:38:00 PM
"The accelerator of change" Showing the quick change from frost to spring's burst of color. Nice work.
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Date: 11/30/2016 7:26:00 AM
Thank you, Rainbow Promise. There comes a time in the spring when you really can 'feel' it....
Date: 11/29/2016 11:31:00 AM
Great Work!
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Date: 11/30/2016 7:25:00 AM
I appreciate that, Adejumoke. : )
Date: 11/29/2016 11:11:00 AM
I really enjoy your style of writing. Very observant of people and nature. Kudos on a well done piece. Kathy
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Date: 11/29/2016 11:44:00 AM
Hi Kathy. And here we are, in the northern hemisphere at least, at the other pole. ; )
Date: 11/29/2016 7:39:00 AM
Heart-warming use of imagery. Lines that made me exclaim with joy: 'it races to your eye and fills you' , 'all life turning its face to the sun and jumping up an down.' Spendid!
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Date: 11/29/2016 9:24:00 AM
Thank you so much, Mrunali. This was one of those things that came pouring out, pretty much whole. I was driving and stopped to scribble it down. Man, you don't want to wait for later.
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