Notes About The Poem

The Cemetery Was

The cemetery was
Before my very eyes, stillness
Autumn leaves a blanket on the dead

The cemetery was
There, as it always was there
From childhood till now

The cemetery was
For me, my escape, comfort and refuge
Among the strangers and the dead

The cemetery was
My pathway to the heavens
The gateway to my dreams

The cemetery was
Until that one fateful day
My sanctuary

The bullet wasn’t even meant for you my love
You are dead none the less, beneath me
I, who weeps at your grave, lifeless too

Now the cemetery is my hell
Tormented by what ifs
I breathe the autumn frost only

That one day
Our daughter will become
You
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Deschler Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 8:25 PM
Cemeteries can be both painful and peaceful places, it just depends on how you look at them... I was not expecting such a dramatic twist to come in this poem. Very well penned, Arthur.
Y. Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 3:47 PM
Hi Arthur, I apologize for the late congrats. Congratulations for getting the poem of the week. It was well deserved . Enjoy the honor- Alexis
Williams Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 12:47 AM
Quiet Tones. Nice Job. Marilyn
La France Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 11:35 PM
Arthur, congrats on potd, I just did a contest similar, but mine was And The Cemetery Was, wonderful write , 7
Allison Avatar
May 24, 2016 at 3:59 PM
woohoooooo POTW many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Ashe Avatar
May 24, 2016 at 12:33 AM
The sixth stanza tore my heart in this write! gripping words right up to the last "You!" Congrats to you on this POTW! This is powerful!!!
Davey Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 6:25 PM
Congrats on POTW Arthur with another thought provoking tale!
Hicks Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 4:14 PM
Very haunting and grabs at you with the dark implications ... "The bullet wasn't even meant for you my love" ... I wonder who it was for. You write the words, and I ponder. A wonderful contender for the contest, Art.
Smith Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 9:06 PM
Happy POTW Arturo !!!
Nance Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 6:57 AM
Oh wow, that gives me chills....
Dietrich Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 8:47 PM
JUst came back here to say goodnight. Gotta hurry off soon!! Thanks for your comment.
Y. Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 6:21 PM
Hi Authur, You have penned such a sad write with raw emotions. You took the reader on journey, we started out in heaven and now hell is before us. Excellent job my friend. Good luck in the contest. 7 - Alexis
Murray Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 5:16 PM
So,he lives only for the daughter? Beautifully sad. Good luck in the contest.
Smith Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 3:27 PM
You paint with the perfect amount of sadness to draw us into your emotions Arthur...a fave
Callus Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 3:22 AM
I love it, Arthur; you put your heart and soul into it; emotional, great build-up, and as usual...a formidable ending! #7 ~ Regards // paul
Allison Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 1:48 AM
WOW I see the contest has inspired you to write yet another Vaso masterpiece - I had a feeling you would be writing on this theme ... fabulous powerful pen:-) hugs Jan xx7
Dietrich Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 1:09 AM
wow, this one is POWERFUL in its depiction of grief and tragedy. LOVE that last little verse. Outstanding work, ARthur. FAVE.
Vaso Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 8:37 PM
Thanks Andrea, Hugs!
Gupta Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 12:40 AM
How touchingly seasons changed in a small poem...very good....
Vaso Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 8:37 PM
Thank you kindly Probir
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