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The Cemetery Today

A 
Visit
Today to
Cemetery
Father's Day no dad
To talk to and share thoughts
Too hot to stay and visit
The grave was in good shape weed free
Mother's parents and grandparents' graves
Need the grass pulled out and tending some...Sad

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Lynette Chachere

Date: 6/21/2010 9:40:00 PM

very depressing. being without a parent on their own special day..but also so thoughtful of you. Sara.you can always keep your emotions here. ~Always&Forever LYnette

Marycile Beer

Date: 6/21/2010 4:44:00 PM

Best keep my mind on my work and I might not miss adding the last of words when there are combinations like UNDERSTAND. God Bless, Cile

Marycile Beer

Date: 6/21/2010 4:29:00 PM

A very nice poem but I don't under most of the new versions of poetry. I am just to old to change I guess. God Bless, Cile

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 6/21/2010 8:22:00 AM

This is excellent. I like the essence of this poem. It show reverence to those who have gone before. Great job! Joseph

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 6/21/2010 7:21:00 AM

Lost my Dad 6 years ago.. His ashes are at my Moms house. He always said if you want to see me come to the house, and thats for ever... wonderful write Sara... I feel for you. Michael

Gert W. Knop

Date: 6/21/2010 3:22:00 AM

So good to know that you care, a fine tribute to yor family, Sara! I wished I could do that too, but I live too far away to tend the graves of my mother, father and grandparents. But they all live in my heart. Thank you for yor kind comments ....Keep on writing!...Gert