Sara Kendrick Poet Etheree

The Cemetery Today

A 
Visit
Today to
Cemetery
Father's Day no dad
To talk to and share thoughts
Too hot to stay and visit
The grave was in good shape weed free
Mother's parents and grandparents' graves
Need the grass pulled out and tending some...Sad

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Lynette Chachere June 21, 2010 at 9:40 PM very depressing. being without a parent on their own special day..but also so thoughtful of you. Sara.you can always keep your emotions here. ~Always&Forever LYnette

Marycile Beer June 21, 2010 at 4:44 PM Best keep my mind on my work and I might not miss adding the last of words when there are combinations like UNDERSTAND. God Bless, Cile

Marycile Beer June 21, 2010 at 4:29 PM A very nice poem but I don't under most of the new versions of poetry. I am just to old to change I guess. God Bless, Cile

Joseph Spence Sr June 21, 2010 at 8:22 AM This is excellent. I like the essence of this poem. It show reverence to those who have gone before. Great job! Joseph

Michael J. Falotico June 21, 2010 at 7:21 AM Lost my Dad 6 years ago.. His ashes are at my Moms house. He always said if you want to see me come to the house, and thats for ever... wonderful write Sara... I feel for you. Michael

Gert W. Knop June 21, 2010 at 3:22 AM So good to know that you care, a fine tribute to yor family, Sara! I wished I could do that too, but I live too far away to tend the graves of my mother, father and grandparents. But they all live in my heart. Thank you for yor kind comments ....Keep on writing!...Gert

Andrea Dietrich June 20, 2010 at 10:36 PM wow, it is so good to see someone doing more etheree after the contest. Had you done them before? I think you are great with them! Luv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta June 20, 2010 at 6:46 PM A fine tribute on Father's day and the last two lines very meaningful

Phyllis Babcock June 20, 2010 at 6:23 PM It is sad. I lost my dad to cancer 11 years ago. He passed away June 15/99. I know my mom will put flowers there today. Sad yes. God Bless Phyl

Tirzah Conway June 20, 2010 at 5:02 PM Very sad:( ~Tirzah~

Constance La France June 20, 2010 at 4:10 PM Aaah, the sadness, seeps through the words, dear heart, I know this feeling well... love Constance