''The Cemetery''


I entered gates that were rusty and old, worn with age,
     This eternal resting place filled my soul with sadness;
The time of year did not help, barren trees hanging low,
           Dried up flowers lay forlorn on rows of graves.

I followed a pathway taking me deep into the maze of sorrow,
     Many stones difficult to read, erosion and time destroyed;
Some were simple crosses and others pristine granite markers,
          I crossed over a bridge above a rippling stream.

Dark valleys lay before me and toppled statues rest in peace,
     This scene of sadness holds a place in my soul forever;
For among the burial plots, vaults, lays a beloved sad memory,
          Of my childhood cat, Snowball, forever in this place.

                    This pet cemetery, serene and tranquil,

                                                And I still weep . . . .

____________________________
March 21, 2014


Verse

Theme - Write  me sad

Submitted to the contest, Moods, sponsor, Silent One, Fourth Place

Submitted to the contest, The Saddest Landscape, sponsor, Skat, Second Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Inman Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 1:12 AM
Very descriptive, well written.
A. Sharma Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 11:15 PM
Superb write BW that's worthy of great win! Big congrats!
A  Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 4:24 PM
Broken, love the write....Congrats. SK
Campbell Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 1:00 PM
I can relate well to you poem. I appreciate both the skillful writing and the deep feelings regarding loss of a loved animal, whether as an adult or child. Barbara
Allison Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 7:56 AM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Ebbs Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 11:59 PM
Nicely written...I had a black labrador retriever named Rex when I was a young...we would do so many things together. My parents property bordered forestland and I loved to explore. The two of us would run down trails together, well sometimes Rex would see a dear and off with the chase he went; I tried to keep up but ended up turning back eventually, and about the time I would get back down from the hill to home, he would come running to catch up ~ Memories :)
Laurie Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 8:31 PM
Hello Broken Wings... many cannot understand how precious and loved some pets are that offer unconditional love and stave off loneliness but instead of discarding them, there's a with to never forget what they provided... your poem is something special for heartbroken mates - Lindsay
Allison Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 6:24 PM
a beautiful tribute Broken Wings I know how precious your pets are to you - good luck with the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
Deremer Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 6:04 PM
Thank you for sharing.
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