The Cave

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fearselfquintain (english)

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Curtis Johnson

July 14, 2017 at 6:37 PM

Hi Andrew. Enjoyed the read. Good to know you're in the 'winners circle'. No doubt, you are reaching out and helping others.

Andrew Walker

July 15, 2017 at 12:05 PM

Thanks for the comment!

Bawa Talwar

July 14, 2017 at 6:08 PM

Thisis a thought provoking piece . The form is narrative its moving too.poet is now free from bondage of any kind.Great poem. Kindly review my work too as I'm relatively new.

Andrew Walker

July 15, 2017 at 12:02 PM

Thank you for commenting. It is great to see other people enjoy my writing, I'll definitely check out yours too.

Becca Teagan

July 4, 2017 at 9:17 AM

oh my, this is intense. Going from bondage to freedom by discovering what was holding you in chains, and resolving to fight against these things - I'm in awe. Brilliant poem! ps I love the monorhymes in this.

Andrew Walker

July 4, 2017 at 9:30 AM

Thank you!

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