The Cave

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Curtis Johnson

Date: 7/14/2017 6:37:00 PM

Hi Andrew. Enjoyed the read. Good to know you're in the 'winners circle'. No doubt, you are reaching out and helping others.

Andrew Walker
Date: 7/15/2017 12:05:00 PM

Thanks for the comment!

Bawa Talwar

Date: 7/14/2017 6:08:00 PM

Thisis a thought provoking piece . The form is narrative its moving too.poet is now free from bondage of any kind.Great poem. Kindly review my work too as I'm relatively new.

Andrew Walker
Date: 7/15/2017 12:02:00 PM

Thank you for commenting. It is great to see other people enjoy my writing, I'll definitely check out yours too.

Becca Teagan

Date: 7/4/2017 9:17:00 AM

oh my, this is intense. Going from bondage to freedom by discovering what was holding you in chains, and resolving to fight against these things - I'm in awe. Brilliant poem! ps I love the monorhymes in this.

Andrew Walker
Date: 7/4/2017 9:30:00 AM

Thank you!