The Cauldron of Life

potholes of panic- in the tunnel of my mind a glimmer of light Inspired by Raul's latest photo

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/22/2010 7:51:00 AM

Hey, that's a great take on the photo, Brian. Nice bit of introspection here -- quite original. And you will have Soup mail in a moment. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/22/2010 7:46:00 AM

Very cool ... luv your title and what a great visual u have of the new photo contest.. awesome and good luck for this gem..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/22/2010 7:46:00 AM

Oh, this is a good one!! The title too....(wish I had thought of cauldron!!) I think this will do well !!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/22/2010 4:43:00 AM

funny poem--potholes of panic...that is good.