The Cat and the Rat

There once was Princess the cat
Who found a big fat hairy rat
She brought it in to play
But mother said no way
And found her a very big metal bat

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Date: 2/27/2015 9:35:00 PM
I get the hee bee gee bee's thinking bout rat's and mice. That's the thing about kitty's I guess aren't very nice.
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Janet Eaton
Date: 2/28/2015 3:31:00 AM
LOL I do to Robert you should have seen me trying to catch that thing. Now that is something I should write about, there would be a funny story. Hugs Janet
Date: 2/17/2015 8:04:00 PM
ahhh better rhythm! There once was Princess the cat/ Who found a fat hairy rat/ She brought it to play/ But ma said no way And found her a big brass bat.] I just evened out the syllables if you stick to single or double syllable words its easier! HUGS Light & Love
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Janet Eaton
Date: 2/18/2015 6:12:00 AM
Yours sounds so much better. Like I said back to the drawing board today. I'm snowed in anyway, might as well learn today:) Thank you Debbie. Hugs Janet
Date: 2/17/2015 4:55:00 AM
- Reading this with a smile, Janet :) - Do not play with your food - I wish you a lovely day! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Janet Eaton
Date: 2/17/2015 5:44:00 AM
So glad you enjoyed Anne Lise. Thanks for stopping in. Hugs.
Date: 2/16/2015 5:04:00 PM
lol....I had the bunny before but the rat had to be frightening....hugs Tim
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Janet Eaton
Date: 2/16/2015 5:08:00 PM
Yes Tim the rat was quite frightening. The worst part was once I finally got the rat caught, I could not kill it I had to let it go:(
Date: 2/16/2015 4:43:00 PM
G'day Janet... Thanks for the giggle Janet. Rats inside the house do have a tendency to attract violence. Catch you later - Lindsay
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Janet Eaton
Date: 2/16/2015 5:06:00 PM
"Thanks for stopping in Lindsay, a little humor on a snowy day. Good for the soul"
Date: 2/16/2015 4:37:00 PM
lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Janet Eaton
Date: 2/16/2015 4:43:00 PM
This is a true story Jan, I could write a book about all the crazy things these cats have done. lol Janet
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