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The Cat and the Rat

There once was Princess the cat Who found a big fat hairy rat She brought it in to play But mother said no way And found her a very big metal bat

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Robert Johnson

Date: 2/27/2015 9:35:00 PM

I get the hee bee gee bee's thinking bout rat's and mice. That's the thing about kitty's I guess aren't very nice.

Janet Eaton
Date: 2/28/2015 3:31:00 AM

LOL I do to Robert you should have seen me trying to catch that thing. Now that is something I should write about, there would be a funny story. Hugs Janet

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/17/2015 8:04:00 PM

ahhh better rhythm! There once was Princess the cat/ Who found a fat hairy rat/ She brought it to play/ But ma said no way And found her a big brass bat.] I just evened out the syllables if you stick to single or double syllable words its easier! HUGS Light & Love

Janet Eaton
Date: 2/18/2015 6:12:00 AM

Yours sounds so much better. Like I said back to the drawing board today. I'm snowed in anyway, might as well learn today:) Thank you Debbie. Hugs Janet

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/17/2015 4:55:00 AM

- Reading this with a smile, Janet :) - Do not play with your food - I wish you a lovely day! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janet Eaton
Date: 2/17/2015 5:44:00 AM

So glad you enjoyed Anne Lise. Thanks for stopping in. Hugs.

Tim Smith

Date: 2/16/2015 5:04:00 PM

lol....I had the bunny before but the rat had to be frightening....hugs Tim

Janet Eaton
Date: 2/16/2015 5:08:00 PM

Yes Tim the rat was quite frightening. The worst part was once I finally got the rat caught, I could not kill it I had to let it go:(

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 2/16/2015 4:43:00 PM

G'day Janet... Thanks for the giggle Janet. Rats inside the house do have a tendency to attract violence. Catch you later - Lindsay

Janet Eaton
Date: 2/16/2015 5:06:00 PM

"Thanks for stopping in Lindsay, a little humor on a snowy day. Good for the soul"

Jan Allison

Date: 2/16/2015 4:37:00 PM

lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Janet Eaton
Date: 2/16/2015 4:43:00 PM

This is a true story Jan, I could write a book about all the crazy things these cats have done. lol Janet