The Cat and the Rat

There once was Princess the cat
Who found a big fat hairy rat
She brought it in to play
But mother said no way
And found her a very big metal bat
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Johnson Avatar
February 27, 2015 at 9:35 PM
I get the hee bee gee bee's thinking bout rat's and mice. That's the thing about kitty's I guess aren't very nice.
Eaton Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 3:31 AM
LOL I do to Robert you should have seen me trying to catch that thing. Now that is something I should write about, there would be a funny story. Hugs Janet
Guzzi Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 8:04 PM
ahhh better rhythm! There once was Princess the cat/ Who found a fat hairy rat/ She brought it to play/ But ma said no way And found her a big brass bat.] I just evened out the syllables if you stick to single or double syllable words its easier! HUGS Light & Love
Eaton Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 6:12 AM
Yours sounds so much better. Like I said back to the drawing board today. I'm snowed in anyway, might as well learn today:) Thank you Debbie. Hugs Janet
Andresen Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 4:55 AM
- Reading this with a smile, Janet :) - Do not play with your food - I wish you a lovely day! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Eaton Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 5:44 AM
So glad you enjoyed Anne Lise. Thanks for stopping in. Hugs.
Smith Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 5:04 PM
lol....I had the bunny before but the rat had to be frightening....hugs Tim
Eaton Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 5:08 PM
Yes Tim the rat was quite frightening. The worst part was once I finally got the rat caught, I could not kill it I had to let it go:(
Laurie Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 4:43 PM
G'day Janet... Thanks for the giggle Janet. Rats inside the house do have a tendency to attract violence. Catch you later - Lindsay
Eaton Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 5:06 PM
"Thanks for stopping in Lindsay, a little humor on a snowy day. Good for the soul"
Allison Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 4:37 PM
lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
Eaton Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 4:43 PM
This is a true story Jan, I could write a book about all the crazy things these cats have done. lol Janet
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