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A special Thank You to Catie Lindsey for awarding this story First Prize in her Catfish Poetry Contest. I am thrilled, and honored!

You can see the illustrated version of The Cat and The Fish at my website LinesWithLines.com

The Cat and the Fish Premiere Contest Winner

A cat jumped in the river
to meet a fellow fish,
he wanted to be like them
it was his only wish.

He figured he could do it
he had everything it takes,
with whiskers on his front parts
and a tail a catfish makes.

He swam down to the bottom
while holding in his breath,
but soon began to worry
that this might end in his death.

His little heart was pounding 
as he raced back to the top,
he determined if he made it
that he wasn't going to stop.

He broke the surface with a splash
and gulped in lots of air,
He climbed up the embankment
and ran like he didn't care.

He ran through empty fields
and to home ran all the way,
and when he got their safely
stopped to think about the day...

"I love to watch the catfish
as they circle down below,
they move around so effortless
and offer quite a show."

He wanted to be like them
so he thought, in blissful glee,
but then he came to realize
...'twas curiosity.

Their mesmerizing silky glide
and tantalizing tryst,
offered a temptation
that brings us to this twist:

The cat by then concluded
that it was to be his fate,
that he should rather have the catfish
on his dinner plate.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 10/31/2018 4:17:00 AM
oh! cat and fish = catfish! lovely poem. like it- reminds it- the game of Tom and Jerry //// nice
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Date: 10/30/2018 11:59:00 AM
Nice one Cary, well-penned piece! Gordon
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Date: 6/18/2018 10:04:00 AM
So great Cary! love the rhythm of this story...your cat reminds me a little of Don Knotts in an old movie Mr. Limpet...I wish I was a fish...I wish I was a fish...
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Cary Snowden
Date: 6/18/2018 10:16:00 AM
Thanks for the note, Chris, and for reminding me about Mr. Limpet. I loved that movie as a kid and will never forget watching it on a small TV while swimming in my grandfather's pool. -Cary
Date: 6/17/2018 5:50:00 PM
Love it.
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Cary Snowden
Date: 6/17/2018 7:23:00 PM
Thank you, Shirley; amazing how so few words could mean so much to me. Thanks for the note! -Cary
Date: 6/10/2018 7:01:00 PM
Wow to have discovered your poetry, especially this one....very captivating, kept me to the end...loved this piece.
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Cary Snowden
Date: 6/10/2018 11:56:00 PM
Thank you, Karen! I'm glad you liked it and happy to make your acquaintance! Thank you for the note; that was very nice. -Cary
Date: 6/10/2018 6:14:00 PM
What a great read. Your poem reminds me of Ogden Nash. Very well done. Congrats. Oliver
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Cary Snowden
Date: 6/10/2018 11:58:00 PM
Ogden Nash?! Wow! What a thrilling compliment! Thank you, Oliver, I'm so glad you liked it! -Cary
Date: 6/10/2018 5:44:00 PM
Love it, love it, love it, quick paced with great rhythm a bit of a moral in the tale with a twist at the end, regards Kevin
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Cary Snowden
Date: 6/10/2018 11:49:00 PM
Thank you, Kevin! Super cool comment - thanks for letting me know you liked it! -Cary
Date: 6/3/2018 5:27:00 PM
what a cute dun poem, congrats on your win Cary:-) hugs Jan xx
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Cary Snowden
Date: 6/10/2018 11:48:00 PM
Thank you, Jan! -Cary
Date: 6/2/2018 9:04:00 AM
Congratulations Cary on your podium write. Very entertaining and creative!
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Cary Snowden
Date: 6/3/2018 12:48:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel. I appreciate the nod and thank you for taking a minute to write a comment. I appreciate it very much. -Cary
Date: 6/2/2018 5:31:00 AM
Nice, nice, nice, now its time to get out of the house and go fishing.
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Cary Snowden
Date: 6/3/2018 12:47:00 AM
Thank you, Jerry! I'm not sure where you are from, but if your weather has been anything like ours here in the western USA, it's been a perfect weekend for fishing or just about anything else outdoors. I hope your weekend has been a good one! Thank you for the note! -Cary
Date: 6/1/2018 11:59:00 PM
Congrats. enjoyed the lighthearted flow
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Cary Snowden
Date: 6/3/2018 12:44:00 AM
Thank you, Virginia, I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for writing, too; it's been fun to get comments from readers and I really appreciate you taking a moment to share your thoughts! -Cary
Date: 6/1/2018 9:48:00 PM
An awesome poem. Congrats on your well deserved first place, Cary.
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Cary Snowden
Date: 6/3/2018 12:42:00 AM
Thank you, Line, for saying it is awesome - that put a big smile on my face. Thanks for taking the time to let me know you enjoyed it - very cool. -Cary
Date: 6/1/2018 9:37:00 PM
Interesting and well crafted, Thank you for sharing and Congratulations :)
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Cary Snowden
Date: 6/3/2018 12:39:00 AM
Thank you Paris-Maree! I love that you found it interesting. I appreciate your support; thank you for writing! -Cary
Date: 6/1/2018 8:06:00 PM
Fabulous verse, Cary, I enjoyed reading...Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Cary Snowden
Date: 6/3/2018 12:38:00 AM
Thank you, Eve! I appreciate your note. Thank you for taking the time to make my day! -Cary
Date: 6/1/2018 11:22:00 AM
Well done. A great piece and a deserved 1st place.
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Cary Snowden
Date: 6/1/2018 2:21:00 PM
Wow, Fauxcroft; that's quite a vote of confidence! Thank you very much, I appreciate the note! -Cary
Date: 6/1/2018 10:15:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win! FANTASTIC! Janice
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Cary Snowden
Date: 6/1/2018 10:18:00 AM
Thank you, Janice! -Cary
Date: 6/1/2018 8:15:00 AM
Back to congratulate! :) Read it again and am smiling still. Written well, flows and rhymes. Well done! #1 win!!
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Cary Snowden
Date: 6/1/2018 9:12:00 AM
Thank you, Susan! It's an honor to win, and thrilling to hear that you enjoyed it. Thank you! -Cary
Date: 6/1/2018 7:41:00 AM
Cary, congrats on your 1st place win in Catie's contest.
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Cary Snowden
Date: 6/1/2018 9:12:00 AM
Thank you, Curtis! -Cary
Date: 6/1/2018 6:01:00 AM
Fabulous fun poem Cary! A delight to read :) Congratulations on a fine trophy win! xomo
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Cary Snowden
Date: 6/1/2018 2:28:00 PM
Thank you, Maureen! I'm planning to keep this one squared and centered on the mantle! I appreciate your note and am glad you liked it! -Cary
Date: 5/21/2018 3:35:00 AM
This is so cute, well written, fun. It should do great in the contest - I hope you enter it.
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Cary Snowden
Date: 5/21/2018 8:56:00 AM
Thank you for saying so, Susan; I did! ...at least I think I did. I'm new at this so I'm still learning the ropes and working to figure out how the site works. Thanks again, your comment was very uplifting at the start of a heavy workday.
Date: 5/20/2018 6:03:00 PM
Hello Cary Snowden, I think the cat learned his lesson. I enjoyed the poem. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/30/2018 10:23:00 AM
Your welcome.I agree with Susan,this poem should be in a contest. have a nice day my friend.I will always let you knowhow i read or see your poem. have a nice day my friend.
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Cary Snowden
Date: 5/20/2018 10:47:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Darlene, I appreciate that you took a minute to let me know. Thank you, too, for being my first ever commenter; you've made my day! —Cary
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