The Casualties of War - Collab Contest

Walk with pride, with your head held high
Conflict and war is not your fault
Face turns away whilst tears you cry.

You can't understand this, who knows why,
When will all these emotions finally halt 
Walk with pride, with your head held high

You were called to fight to kill or die
Highly trained killer with senses taut
Face turns away whilst tears you cry

No moral standard on which you can rely
You're own conscience now begins its assault
Walk with pride with your head held high

Time for your memories to heal that’s why
You need a guilt free mind no more bad thoughts
Face turns away whilst tears you cry

A certain sense of pride you cannot deny 
Your own existence you begin to exalt
Walk with pride, with your head held high 
Face turns away whilst tears you cry.

 

Penned by Wayland Bunch and Seren Roberts on 5 April 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Deschler Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 12:41 PM
Very powerful words that were written with true feeling. I could feel the emotions coming through in every line. Very well done to you both! Congratulations on your win, as well!...Thank you for the kind congrats. :)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 2:09 AM
I think this should have placed higher it is a smashing collab and so thought provoking xx
Guzzi Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 4:44 PM
Congrad's on your collaboration winning. Light & Love
Onclaud Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 12:42 PM
what a deep and intense piece... sweet congrats, wayland and seren.. huggs
Walker  Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 12:30 PM
Nicely done Wayland Bunch and Serene... Congratulations on you all's win... Verlena
Devonshire Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 10:53 AM
Wayland and Seren, Very, very powerful write here. So often life's challenges bring us down, but we do have to learn to move forward with a "sense of pride," even when we still hold the pain inside. Excellent! Congrats on your success in the contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 10:33 AM
Brilliantly collaborated poem. Congrats on the win, seren
Callus Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 10:03 AM
Congrats to you both; a very strong and touching read. // paul
Sivey Avatar
April 6, 2014 at 7:13 AM
This is phenomenal Seren, what an amazing write my friend! I am so grateful that I got to read such a wonderful poem as this one! You both did an outstanding job! What a glorious piece, Great Work!!
Roberts Avatar
April 6, 2014 at 11:51 PM
Thanks Russell, glad you enjoyed it......Seren
Gasun Avatar
April 5, 2014 at 10:39 PM
This is a great collaboration poem my dear friend Seren. You did it well. I love it & so enjoyed. Thank u so much for sharing! Good luck in the contest. By the way, I'm sorry if I wasn't able to finish the poem in your contest IF. I was running out of time. I'll try next time/next contest ok. Thank u so much again. More blessings! love and big hugs,Leonora
Roberts Avatar
April 6, 2014 at 3:02 AM
Thanks for your comment. Glad you enjoyed our joint effort.....Seren
Richards Avatar
April 5, 2014 at 8:56 PM
What a wonderful colab poem.......one gets the sense that it was written by a single person. This is awesome!
Roberts Avatar
April 6, 2014 at 3:00 AM
Thanks Carrie lol it was done via e mails, glad it came over as we intended...Seren
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