The Castle Within

Forts and Castles Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Craig Cornish 
Contest Judged:  10/27/2025 12:01:00 PM
( 4th Place )

Written: October 14, 2025


"Within the heart, strength gathers quietly,
and light returns to rooms once closed to it." 
_ Poet

I was never shaped from stone,
yet quiet walls took root inside me;
every memory a stepping stone,
every pause a thread of strength.

Years taught me endurance
in the art of stillness…
how to let the air move freely inside
without letting it shatter me.

Time softened my edges.
Moss clung to old sorrows,
and ivy traced gentle paths.
Now I open the gate at dawn
and light drifts softly inside…
a guest I no longer fear.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Cornish Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 6:27 AM
Rowena, love where you took this and emptied these emotions so peacefully and honestly - love the welcoming light as a guest...
Velasco Avatar
November 18, 2025 at 11:33 PM
Thank you so much! your words mean more than you know. I’m grateful you felt that light in the piece - sometimes the heart speaks quietly but it’s beautiful when someone hears it.
K. Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 8:31 AM
Wonderfully written and I really enjoyed how your poem flowed and the perspective in which you wrote it. Congrats on your win!
Velasco Avatar
November 18, 2025 at 11:34 PM
Thank you so much! It really warms my heart to know that the emotions came through and felt welcoming to you…Your words mean a lot!
Poteet Avatar
October 28, 2025 at 4:30 PM
Beautiful Rowena, flow is perfect and the ending equally right for the piece including the self-quote. Congratulations on a fine readable write.
Velasco Avatar
November 18, 2025 at 11:36 PM
Thank you so much! I’m genuinely touched that the flow and ending felt right to you!
Greenhough Avatar
October 14, 2025 at 8:33 PM
I feel your poem to the heart. You've written a masterful poem of transformation. I truly like reading it.
Velasco Avatar
November 18, 2025 at 11:37 PM
Thank you so much! I’m truly glad it spoke to your heart.
Leake Avatar
October 14, 2025 at 10:33 AM
A beautiful emotion piece Rowena Enjoyed it Best wishes Kevin
Velasco Avatar
November 18, 2025 at 11:38 PM
Thank you.
Gifford Avatar
October 14, 2025 at 6:56 AM
An emotional beautiful write, Rowena. Have a great day, my friend.
Velasco Avatar
November 18, 2025 at 11:39 PM
Thank you so much, friend! Wishing you a beautiful day as well.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 5:45 PM
wow, what a beautifully deep and inspriational poem. I liked 'time softened my edges..." Faving this one
Velasco Avatar
November 18, 2025 at 11:39 PM
Thank you.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace