The Castle

In the green countryside of Wales,
A castle sits, dark and decaying,
It holds many ghostly tales,
That the locals keep relaying.

Surrounded by majestic, rolling hillsides,
Covered by a gray, misty shroud,
And cliffs high above the blue sea tides,
Where voices still ring out loud.

What was once a beautiful garden,
Where all the children used to play,
Has been left to whither and harden,
Just as the castle was left to decay.

Long cobwebs hang like curtains of lace,
In windows that remain dark and cold,
Someone still walks the crumbling staircase,
Just as they did in the days of old.

They walk the towers and through the halls,
Making the dusty, wooden floors creak,
Their portraits still hang on the walls,
Where the voices of the dead still speak.

The empty rooms will never make a sound,
But, if you listen hard enough to their history,
Stories of romance and love still abound,
Along with secrets of murders and mystery.




August 8th, 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Black Avatar
August 30, 2016 at 8:25 PM
Hello Kelly, Your write is very perfect. It almost looked like you have told a history tale in the form of poem. Wow! The way you have described mystery here, is truely amazing. Also the scene of nature flow and darkness is quite fantastic. All the best. Kelly.. keep on writing. 7/7
Deschler Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 6:04 PM
Thank you so much, Augastus. Your kind and encouraging comments really meant a lot to me :)
Halliday Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 8:43 PM
Very nicely done. Enjoyed it a lot. I did something similar called The Sentinel.
Deschler Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 5:35 PM
Thank you very much for the kind comments, Mark. I am glad you enjoyed it. I will be stopping by shortly to read your poem. :)
Lamoureux Avatar
February 4, 2014 at 6:51 PM
Enjoyed reading again, congrats on winning another contest with this beauty.
Deschler Avatar
February 6, 2014 at 6:40 PM
Thank you for the kind words, Richard. I appreciate you stopping by to enjoy my poem, once again!
Oyewole Avatar
February 4, 2014 at 11:12 AM
This is really beautiful! Big Congrats on your win.
Deschler Avatar
February 4, 2014 at 11:03 PM
Thank you very much for the kind comments! I appreciate you stopping by.
Mehta Avatar
February 4, 2014 at 6:09 AM
Enjoyed your write on castle and congrats on the win, Kelly
Deschler Avatar
February 4, 2014 at 10:51 PM
Thank you very much, Dr. Ram! I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem.
Hamilton Avatar
February 3, 2014 at 11:38 PM
very good Kelly you took me with you congrats on 2nd place ty for entering Shadow x smile hug
Deschler Avatar
February 4, 2014 at 10:40 PM
Thank you very much for the placement, Shadow! I am glad that you enjoyed my poem. Thank you for the kind comments, also. :)
Squyres Avatar
February 2, 2014 at 10:58 AM
oh my !!! Thanks for pointing me to your poem in a comment. What a great haunted poem of a castle. Your images bring me to view in vivid detail !! Wonderful, just wonderful !!!
Deschler Avatar
February 4, 2014 at 2:03 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read this poem of mine. I am so glad that you liked it! And, thank you for the kind words, Debra!
Phookan Avatar
January 28, 2014 at 6:19 AM
Congrats Kelly on a fine win in this contest,, It's beautiful and a very well written poem. Loved it so! huggs... gautami
Deschler Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 5:32 PM
Thank you for the kind words, Gautami. I appreciate it very much! And, I am so happy that you enjoyed my poem. Hugs :)
Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 8:38 PM
How nice this is, So gothic, yes!! Glad to see this on the winners' list. You deserved a number one!!
Deschler Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 5:22 PM
Thank you so much for the kind words, Andrea! That really means a lot to me. :)
Kendrick Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 5:42 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go..Sara
Mehta Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 8:53 AM
Enjoyed the poem for In the faraway contest and congrats on the win,Kelly
Horsch Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 7:37 AM
Now this is a very good poem Kelly, Congrats on your win....Hugs....Roger
Deschler Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 6:55 PM
Thank you very much, Roger! I always appreciate your kind words. Hugs.
Davis Avatar
December 9, 2013 at 6:33 PM
Kelly Such an emotional and imaginative story of this castle and surroundings. You told the tale with so much imagery and feeling the reader can feel they are right there. Nice job Thanks for the great comment on my Busy Christmas poem. Hugs
A  Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 4:42 PM
Hi Kelly, how are you..stopping by this one again. I posted a poem called Sheol... haha..Inspired by you... SKAT
Mcdaid Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 8:43 PM
i give you top marks excellent piece call into whats the networks it might inspire thoughts
Mohammed Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 8:21 PM
I see you've used a traditional style that not many pen in today. This is exactly how I write most of my rhyming poems. Another great piece of writing, your narrative is strong also.
Morgan Avatar
August 28, 2013 at 7:44 PM
wonderful spin. . really there's such a place in Wales?
Deschler Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 9:16 PM
I didn't write this about any one particular castle, it really only exists in my mind! But, there is one in Wales that I 've heard of called Margham Castle, which this could definitely apply to.
Posey Avatar
August 25, 2013 at 1:36 PM
Kelly, congrats on your win.... I enjoyed this one very much.... Jake
A  Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 7:57 PM
It is beautiful Kelly, congratulations......SKAT
Lamoureux Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 1:17 PM
Well expressed, congrats!
Eastman Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 11:36 AM
A very enjoyable read... Congrats on your win!
Zerbst Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 6:53 PM
This is a very good poem. Much better in construction and quality than its place in the contest suggests. The reason being that I felt it was weak in idealism and praise of heroism and virtue. Bar that it is a top placing poem.
Kendrick Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 12:24 PM
I like the story told in this one..It has great rhythm, rhyme, and flow..I enjoyed reading it today..Thanks for reading and taking time to comment on my work..Your comments are uplifting..Sara
Cooper Avatar
August 10, 2013 at 7:00 PM
lovely sinister, dark. you might enjoy darkpoetry.com ;)
Duncan Avatar
August 9, 2013 at 8:49 PM
I so much love this write, going to fav's ;}
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