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The Castle

In the green countryside of Wales, A castle sits, dark and decaying, It holds many ghostly tales, That the locals keep relaying. Surrounded by majestic, rolling hillsides, Covered by a gray, misty shroud, And cliffs high above the blue sea tides, Where voices still ring out loud. What was once a beautiful garden, Where all the children used to play, Has been left to whither and harden, Just as the castle was left to decay. Long cobwebs hang like curtains of lace, In windows that remain dark and cold, Someone still walks the crumbling staircase, Just as they did in the days of old. They walk the towers and through the halls, Making the dusty, wooden floors creak, Their portraits still hang on the walls, Where the voices of the dead still speak. The empty rooms will never make a sound, But, if you listen hard enough to their history, Stories of romance and love still abound, Along with secrets of murders and mystery. August 8th, 2013

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Date: 8/30/2016 8:25:00 PM
Hello Kelly, Your write is very perfect. It almost looked like you have told a history tale in the form of poem. Wow! The way you have described mystery here, is truely amazing. Also the scene of nature flow and darkness is quite fantastic. All the best. Kelly.. keep on writing. 7/7
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 9/16/2016 6:04:00 PM
Thank you so much, Augastus. Your kind and encouraging comments really meant a lot to me :)
Date: 4/29/2014 8:43:00 PM
Very nicely done. Enjoyed it a lot. I did something similar called The Sentinel.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 5/1/2014 5:35:00 PM
Thank you very much for the kind comments, Mark. I am glad you enjoyed it. I will be stopping by shortly to read your poem. :)
Date: 2/4/2014 6:51:00 PM
Enjoyed reading again, congrats on winning another contest with this beauty.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/6/2014 6:40:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words, Richard. I appreciate you stopping by to enjoy my poem, once again!
Date: 2/4/2014 11:12:00 AM
This is really beautiful! Big Congrats on your win.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/4/2014 11:03:00 PM
Thank you very much for the kind comments! I appreciate you stopping by.
Date: 2/4/2014 6:09:00 AM
Enjoyed your write on castle and congrats on the win, Kelly
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/4/2014 10:51:00 PM
Thank you very much, Dr. Ram! I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem.
Date: 2/3/2014 11:38:00 PM
very good Kelly you took me with you congrats on 2nd place ty for entering Shadow x smile hug
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/4/2014 10:40:00 PM
Thank you very much for the placement, Shadow! I am glad that you enjoyed my poem. Thank you for the kind comments, also. :)
Date: 2/2/2014 10:58:00 AM
oh my !!! Thanks for pointing me to your poem in a comment. What a great haunted poem of a castle. Your images bring me to view in vivid detail !! Wonderful, just wonderful !!!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/4/2014 2:03:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read this poem of mine. I am so glad that you liked it! And, thank you for the kind words, Debra!
Date: 1/28/2014 6:19:00 AM
Congrats Kelly on a fine win in this contest,, It's beautiful and a very well written poem. Loved it so! huggs... gautami
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/29/2014 5:32:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words, Gautami. I appreciate it very much! And, I am so happy that you enjoyed my poem. Hugs :)
Date: 1/27/2014 8:38:00 PM
How nice this is, So gothic, yes!! Glad to see this on the winners' list. You deserved a number one!!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/29/2014 5:22:00 PM
Thank you so much for the kind words, Andrea! That really means a lot to me. :)
Date: 1/27/2014 5:42:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go..Sara
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Date: 1/27/2014 8:53:00 AM
Enjoyed the poem for In the faraway contest and congrats on the win,Kelly
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Date: 1/27/2014 7:37:00 AM
Now this is a very good poem Kelly, Congrats on your win....Hugs....Roger
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/27/2014 6:55:00 PM
Thank you very much, Roger! I always appreciate your kind words. Hugs.
Date: 12/9/2013 6:33:00 PM
Kelly Such an emotional and imaginative story of this castle and surroundings. You told the tale with so much imagery and feeling the reader can feel they are right there. Nice job Thanks for the great comment on my Busy Christmas poem. Hugs
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Date: 9/5/2013 4:42:00 PM
Hi Kelly, how are you..stopping by this one again. I posted a poem called Sheol... haha..Inspired by you... SKAT
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Date: 9/1/2013 8:43:00 PM
i give you top marks excellent piece call into whats the networks it might inspire thoughts
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Date: 9/1/2013 8:21:00 PM
I see you've used a traditional style that not many pen in today. This is exactly how I write most of my rhyming poems. Another great piece of writing, your narrative is strong also.
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Date: 8/28/2013 7:44:00 PM
wonderful spin. . really there's such a place in Wales?
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 9/1/2013 9:16:00 PM
I didn't write this about any one particular castle, it really only exists in my mind! But, there is one in Wales that I 've heard of called Margham Castle, which this could definitely apply to.
Date: 8/25/2013 1:36:00 PM
Kelly, congrats on your win.... I enjoyed this one very much.... Jake
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Date: 8/24/2013 7:57:00 PM
It is beautiful Kelly, congratulations......SKAT
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Date: 8/22/2013 1:17:00 PM
Well expressed, congrats!
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Date: 8/22/2013 11:36:00 AM
A very enjoyable read... Congrats on your win!
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Date: 8/21/2013 6:53:00 PM
This is a very good poem. Much better in construction and quality than its place in the contest suggests. The reason being that I felt it was weak in idealism and praise of heroism and virtue. Bar that it is a top placing poem.
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Date: 8/15/2013 12:24:00 PM
I like the story told in this one..It has great rhythm, rhyme, and flow..I enjoyed reading it today..Thanks for reading and taking time to comment on my work..Your comments are uplifting..Sara
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Date: 8/10/2013 7:00:00 PM
lovely sinister, dark. you might enjoy darkpoetry.com ;)
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Date: 8/9/2013 8:49:00 PM
I so much love this write, going to fav's ;}
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