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The Cardinal and the Rose Fable

The cardinal that we see today Started out being a brilliant snow white Until one fall, it noticed a young rose bush with a small new red rose As it grew colder, some flowers in the garden started to slowly fade The white cardinal flew in close to the new red rose Brushing up against it many times with its wings and body Absorbing and preserving its color through fall and winter Returning it to the rose in spring Over years, as the rose bush and the rose matured Each spring, the rose needed less color back from the cardinal Gradually, the white cardinal kept more and more of the red hue Eventually matching the rose and becoming totally red

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Date: 4/15/2024 10:44:00 AM
A lovely fable, Warren: Beautiful imagery and message. Best, SuZ
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Date: 12/26/2023 6:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Warren Doll
Date: 12/28/2023 7:27:00 AM
Silent One, Thanks for your congratulation and visit. Happy New Year~ Warren
Date: 12/24/2023 10:20:00 PM
Warren, congratulations on your win. Have a Merry Christmas.
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Date: 12/28/2023 7:23:00 AM
Eve, thanks so much. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Happy New Year~ Warren
Date: 12/23/2023 4:49:00 AM
Warren, congratulations on your top placement !!
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Date: 12/23/2023 6:34:00 AM
Mike, thanks so much and Happy Holidays~ Warren
Date: 2/7/2023 7:20:00 AM
What a lovely fable, Warren. How rose and cardinal found for each other.
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Date: 2/19/2023 12:23:00 PM
Vijay, thanks so much. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for your visit~ Warren
Date: 1/7/2023 6:16:00 AM
Warren, imagination soars in your lovely and romantic write! Indeed, this is a fable in the truest sense and one that I can hear being read to children a hundred years ago! I am certain that you have a winner here! Happy Saturday!!!
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Date: 1/7/2023 12:29:00 PM
Mike, thanks so much. Happy Saturday~ Warren
Date: 1/2/2023 10:27:00 AM
- A wonderful little story, Warren :) - I wish you a peaceful and lovely new year :) - hugs
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Date: 1/2/2023 11:21:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, great to hear from you. I'm glad that you liked it. Wishing you nothing but the best in 2023- Happy New Year! Sending a huge hug your way~ Warren

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