The Cardinal and the Rose Fable

The cardinal that we see today 
Started out being a brilliant snow white

Until one fall, it noticed a young rose bush with a small new red rose
As it grew colder, some flowers in the garden started to slowly fade
The white cardinal flew in close to the new red rose
Brushing up against it many times with its wings and body
Absorbing and preserving its color through fall and winter
Returning it to the rose in spring

Over years, as the rose bush and the rose matured
Each spring, the rose needed less color back from the cardinal
Gradually, the white cardinal kept more and more of the red hue
Eventually matching the rose and becoming totally red
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Woods Avatar
March 24, 2025 at 6:35 AM
How sweet and clever! A great example for this contest. Thank you for entering this! Xo
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March 26, 2025 at 9:43 AM
Crystol, thank you. I'm glad that you enjoyed it~ Warren
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April 15, 2024 at 10:44 AM
A lovely fable, Warren: Beautiful imagery and message. Best, SuZ
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May 10, 2024 at 7:28 AM
Suz, thanks for your wonderful comments and visit~ Warren
One Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 6:33 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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December 28, 2023 at 7:27 AM
Silent One, Thanks for your congratulation and visit. Happy New Year~ Warren
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December 24, 2023 at 10:20 PM
Warren, congratulations on your win. Have a Merry Christmas.
Doll Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 7:23 AM
Eve, thanks so much. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Happy New Year~ Warren
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December 23, 2023 at 4:49 AM
Warren, congratulations on your top placement !!
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December 23, 2023 at 6:34 AM
Mike, thanks so much and Happy Holidays~ Warren
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February 7, 2023 at 7:20 AM
What a lovely fable, Warren. How rose and cardinal found for each other.
Doll Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 12:23 PM
Vijay, thanks so much. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for your visit~ Warren
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January 7, 2023 at 6:16 AM
Warren, imagination soars in your lovely and romantic write! Indeed, this is a fable in the truest sense and one that I can hear being read to children a hundred years ago! I am certain that you have a winner here! Happy Saturday!!!
Doll Avatar
January 7, 2023 at 12:29 PM
Mike, thanks so much. Happy Saturday~ Warren
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January 2, 2023 at 10:27 AM
- A wonderful little story, Warren :) - I wish you a peaceful and lovely new year :) - hugs
Doll Avatar
January 2, 2023 at 11:21 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, great to hear from you. I'm glad that you liked it. Wishing you nothing but the best in 2023- Happy New Year! Sending a huge hug your way~ Warren
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