The Cardinal and the Rose

No deity on heaven and earth gave repose,
When each rose petal fell heavy like monsoon rain,
The day he abandoned his sweet fragrant Rose

Buried on unhallowed ground, on wanton rows,
With her unborn fatherless child, she was lain,
No deity on heaven and earth gave repose

Ardent promises made beneath smiling crows,
Like bright coloured rose petals drowned by dark grain,
The day he abandoned his sweet fragrant Rose

Below hanging baskets of Babylon, two hearts chose,
Their Garden of Eden where her true heart was slain,
No deity on heaven and earth gave repose

O' How he prayed, guilt stricken for the divine and his Rose, 
Giving out absolutions, his spiritual domain,
The day he abandoned his sweet fragrant Rose

Strolling past orchards, his holy regalia flows,
The rose petals wither promptly and bright hues abstain, 
No deity on heaven and earth gave repose,
The day he abandoned his sweet fragrant Rose

Date: 12/01/23

The Cardinal and the Rose Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Craig Cornish

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 3/31/2023 4:53:00 PM
A beautiful, sad poem, filled with angst and a broken heart. The form is very well done. You do like to experiment with different types of forms, I see. I'm afraid I am not as adventurous. It touches the heart.
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W J Clarke
Date: 4/2/2023 2:20:00 PM
Thank you Barbara. I appreciate your encouraging comments. I really enjoy the challenge experimenting with different forms.
Date: 1/17/2023 1:00:00 PM
Lines filled with sadness, regret, heartbreak and shame WJ. A lovely poem of poignant beauty. Congratulations on your win. Blessings to you.
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W J Clarke
Date: 1/18/2023 1:41:00 AM
Thank you very much Sam. Your encouraging comments mean a lot. Congratulations on your winning high placement.
Date: 1/11/2023 7:44:00 PM
Now this is a unique take on the contest theme, Clarke, hope it places high:)
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W J Clarke
Date: 1/12/2023 5:50:00 AM
Thanks Jo. I tend to go off the radar sometimes :-)
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