The Cardboard Box

Bent and broken, she stumbles along
Looking for a place to sleep
Tired and lonely, her family now gone
She has no tears left to weep

Eighty years old, she's seen it all
A woman who fell thru the cracks
She keeps marching on, refusing to fall
Not caring for the things that she lacks

Another victim of circumstance
She keeps looking for something to eat
She looks thru trash, to find her next meal
A task, she's cursed to repeat

Fifteen years it's been this way
She no longer knows the meaning of shame
Once, she owned a home and her dreams
But now, the recession has came

She keeps moving on, from place to place
Doing what she can to get by
Her home is now, a cardboard box
The place where she'll probably die
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 5/18/2010 2:55:00 PM
Sadder than stories of children of the recession. Sadder that she no longer cares. Atleast she cares about her box to shield her from the elements. Sounds like learned helplessness. Its a shame. Susan
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Date: 5/13/2010 4:10:00 AM
I can not tell you what it meant to me to be able to read your poetry today Larry. I wish you the best in your writing and hope each day takes you to greater heights in it. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/12/2010 2:03:00 PM
Very true and sad, hard to believe it happens like that some.
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Date: 5/12/2010 1:19:00 PM
What a sad story. Happens way to often. Bless her heart.
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