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Premiere Contest WinnerThe Car Not Taken

Two unlocked cars in the lot looked good,
And sorry I could not steal them both
And be one felon, at length I stood
Looking at both as long as I could.
To leave one behind I was quite loath.

A coin toss guided me. I took
The red one (I hoped) the better car
Because it was newer. One last look
At the other. It was time to hook
My new ride up, then vamoose afar.

The car not taken, no keys in sight,
was a beauty in metallic black.
I thought I'd sneak back that same night  
And hot wire this vision of delight
But--Darn it!--I never made it back.

I'm telling my story with a sigh 
And have told it sadly ever since.
Two unlocked cars looked good, and I 
Took the bright red one but now see why,
To me, in jail, it's made NO difference!


a parody of Robert Frost's "The Road Not Taken"

entered in the Seeker's In the Style of My Favorite Poet Contest
on August 15, 2016

Date: December 18, 2020
Contest Title: Parody of a Famous Poem      Placed 1st
Sponsor: L. Milton Hankins
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Rodrigues Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 3:41 PM
LOL! Too funny!
Watt Avatar
January 9, 2021 at 10:06 PM
Wonderful parody, Janice! Congrats on your deserving first place in Milton's contest with this amusing parody of one of my Frost favorites. ~ John
Radhakrishna Avatar
January 9, 2021 at 10:36 AM
You stole the car and the best prize with this one! Congrats on your win and I particularly like the last stanza!
Goldsmith Avatar
January 9, 2021 at 7:23 AM
Congratulations on your win. Great picture with your fun write. Enjoy your win and weekend with blessings...................
Hankins Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 6:49 PM
Janice, the competition was the stiffest I have seen in any of my contests. I had fifty winners, but I culled out the top ten and guess who was at the top??? You really deserve these accolades. Well done!
Allison Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 4:14 PM
very creative indeed Janice many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Leiser Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 11:52 PM
Very creative with great humor, Janice! Loved it :)
Canerdy Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 1:00 AM
Thanks so much, Laura! Janice
Merryman Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 8:51 PM
Janice, you did a great job on this parody! I enjoyed it! Blessings!
Canerdy Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 10:24 PM
Thanks so much, Kim! Janice
Read Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 5:58 PM
This is good. I like it, particularly because my husband has two Vettes - a red one and a black one. But neither is ever left unlocked except inside the closed garage. Cool write.
Canerdy Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 10:28 PM
Thanks so much, Beverly! Janice
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