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This poem is written in tribute to my father-in-law who passed away November 28th.

For sixty-nine long lovely years the Captain manned the helm; he caused the boat to keep afloat while guiding through his realm. Through cloudy days and stormy seas the Captain stood steadfast; with great aplomb he found the calm and gentle seas at last. With first mate and the crew aboard the Captain in control, the vessel sailed through life unveiled, and dignified it’s very soul. But two years last the first mate passed, the Captain lost his will; the crew emerged at first mate’s urge, and guided ship with skill. A sad day in November’s chill the Captain did depart to join first mate at heaven’s gate; the boat now moored with bleeding heart. _______________________________ Rest in peace, Captain
November 30, 2018

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Date: 12/6/2018 10:26:00 PM
You should place these words in a frame. Something to cherish, along with his memory. Moments of his life. Congratulations John, on this win. Hugs, Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/6/2018 10:32:00 PM
Thank you, Brandy, I appreciate the suggestion. I will read the poem at the funeral on Saturday. John
Date: 12/4/2018 3:53:00 PM
Tears, John. I'm so sorry this happened, especially during the holiday season. You know well how to create memorable characters and make the readers feel as if we knew him too. Sadly, the death of President Bush finds his sons in this same state of mind right now. My heart goes out to you and your wife. Love, Carolyn PS - you should have received a Christmas card...
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/4/2018 4:03:00 PM
Thank you for the warm words, Carolyn, it really means a lot. He had not been doing well since my mother-in-law passed away 2 years ago and Debbie was having to go out of town to care for him. He is in a better place and I think it was all part of the good Lord's plan. Thank you for your thoughts my dear friend. John
Date: 12/4/2018 10:14:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem, John , very well written. It stirs a reader's imagination with the imagery and the emotions a wonderful sense of peace and harmony. Congratulations on your win!
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/4/2018 10:35:00 AM
Thank you so much for your thoughts and your wonderful comments, Eve, I'm glad you enjoyed this tribute. John
Date: 12/4/2018 4:48:00 AM
What a thoughtful tribute to such a great man, John. Well expressed. My sympathies in your loss.
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/4/2018 6:16:00 AM
Thanks, Mark, I appreciate it. John
Date: 11/30/2018 7:16:00 PM
I am keeping you and your family in my thoughts and prayers at this time. So sorry for your loss. You have written a beautiful dedication my friend. Your words hold me close. ~ Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/30/2018 8:40:00 PM
Your thoughts and prayers are much appreciated my dear friend. John
Date: 11/30/2018 1:01:00 PM
tenderly imparted and a lovely homage to a man who lived fully for others, john.... my condolences.. huggs
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/30/2018 1:03:00 PM
Thank you so much, Nette, your thoughts mean a great deal to me. John
Date: 11/30/2018 12:48:00 PM
A beautiful verse john and a lovely tribute to your father in law. Sorry for your loss. Tom.
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/30/2018 12:54:00 PM
Thank you, Tom, I appreciate it. John
Date: 11/30/2018 9:45:00 AM
Really nicely done John. The rhyme and meter were smooth and gave this poem a song-like quality.
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/30/2018 10:03:00 AM
Thanks, Chris, I appreciate it. John
Date: 11/30/2018 7:26:00 AM
A fitting tribute.
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/30/2018 7:51:00 AM
Thanks, Jon, I appreciate it. John
Date: 11/30/2018 7:17:00 AM
Rest in peace, dear Captain! Sorry for your loss, sweet friend. A lovely tribute.
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/30/2018 7:26:00 AM
Thank you so much, Kim, I appreciate your thoughts my dear friend. John

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