John Gondolf Poet Rhyme

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This poem is written in tribute to my father-in-law who passed away November 28th.

The Captain

For sixty-nine long lovely years
the Captain manned the helm;
he caused the boat to keep afloat
while guiding through his realm.

Through cloudy days and stormy seas
the Captain stood steadfast;
with great aplomb he found the calm
and gentle seas at last.

With first mate and the crew aboard
the Captain in control,
the vessel sailed through life unveiled,
and dignified it’s very soul.

But two years last the first mate passed,
the Captain lost his will;
the crew emerged at first mate’s urge,
and guided ship with skill.

A sad day in November’s chill
the Captain did depart
to join first mate at heaven’s gate;
the boat now moored with bleeding heart.
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Rest in peace, Captain



November 30, 2018

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Brandy Nicole December 6, 2018 at 10:26 PM You should place these words in a frame. Something to cherish, along with his memory. Moments of his life. Congratulations John, on this win. Hugs, Brandy John Gondolf December 6, 2018 at 10:32 PM Thank you, Brandy, I appreciate the suggestion. I will read the poem at the funeral on Saturday. John

Carolyn Devonshire December 4, 2018 at 3:53 PM Tears, John. I'm so sorry this happened, especially during the holiday season. You know well how to create memorable characters and make the readers feel as if we knew him too. Sadly, the death of President Bush finds his sons in this same state of mind right now. My heart goes out to you and your wife. Love, Carolyn PS - you should have received a Christmas card... John Gondolf December 4, 2018 at 4:03 PM Thank you for the warm words, Carolyn, it really means a lot. He had not been doing well since my mother-in-law passed away 2 years ago and Debbie was having to go out of town to care for him. He is in a better place and I think it was all part of the good Lord's plan. Thank you for your thoughts my dear friend. John

Eve Roper December 4, 2018 at 10:14 AM I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem, John , very well written. It stirs a reader's imagination with the imagery and the emotions a wonderful sense of peace and harmony. Congratulations on your win! John Gondolf December 4, 2018 at 10:35 AM Thank you so much for your thoughts and your wonderful comments, Eve, I'm glad you enjoyed this tribute. John

Mark Elam December 4, 2018 at 4:48 AM What a thoughtful tribute to such a great man, John. Well expressed. My sympathies in your loss. John Gondolf December 4, 2018 at 6:16 AM Thanks, Mark, I appreciate it. John

Brandy Nicole November 30, 2018 at 7:16 PM I am keeping you and your family in my thoughts and prayers at this time. So sorry for your loss. You have written a beautiful dedication my friend. Your words hold me close. ~ Brandy John Gondolf November 30, 2018 at 8:40 PM Your thoughts and prayers are much appreciated my dear friend. John

Nette Onclaud November 30, 2018 at 1:01 PM tenderly imparted and a lovely homage to a man who lived fully for others, john.... my condolences.. huggs John Gondolf November 30, 2018 at 1:03 PM Thank you so much, Nette, your thoughts mean a great deal to me. John

Tom Cunningham November 30, 2018 at 12:48 PM A beautiful verse john and a lovely tribute to your father in law. Sorry for your loss. Tom. John Gondolf November 30, 2018 at 12:54 PM Thank you, Tom, I appreciate it. John

Chris Green November 30, 2018 at 9:45 AM Really nicely done John. The rhyme and meter were smooth and gave this poem a song-like quality. John Gondolf November 30, 2018 at 10:03 AM Thanks, Chris, I appreciate it. John

Jon Gutmacher November 30, 2018 at 7:26 AM A fitting tribute. John Gondolf November 30, 2018 at 7:51 AM Thanks, Jon, I appreciate it. John

Kim Rodrigues November 30, 2018 at 7:17 AM Rest in peace, dear Captain! Sorry for your loss, sweet friend. A lovely tribute. John Gondolf November 30, 2018 at 7:26 AM Thank you so much, Kim, I appreciate your thoughts my dear friend. John