The Cannon's Roar

The cannons roar, hatred inflame Destruction, chaos, without shame Our countries fabric torn apart Pride and conviction rule the heart Life as before we can't reclaim Atrocities in freedoms name Negotiations soon became Words meant to stop, but instead start The cannons roar We won't remember them by name Who heard the bugle's call and came They, on the battlefield depart Victims felled by the warriors art The cannons roar
12/09/2011

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Date: 6/14/2012 12:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Simple Poems" contest Bob. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/13/2012 7:38:00 AM
Bob, congrats on your win..David
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Date: 6/13/2012 11:58:00 AM
Thank you David
Date: 6/12/2012 11:36:00 AM
Strong write Bob...Congrats on you win.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 6/12/2012 2:49:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 6/12/2012 11:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem and win!!! Terry
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Date: 6/12/2012 2:50:00 PM
Thank you Terry
Date: 6/12/2012 9:57:00 AM
A sad commentary on war Bob; you did a fantastic job in the write and congratulations are in order for your worthy win! Elizabeth
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Date: 6/12/2012 2:50:00 PM
Appreciate it Elizabeth
Date: 6/12/2012 9:15:00 AM
BOB.. A wonderful congratulations with your awesome deep poem,... God bless~ XOX*PD
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Date: 6/12/2012 2:51:00 PM
Thank you PD
Date: 12/15/2011 8:31:00 AM
Well written.
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Date: 12/15/2011 8:57:00 AM
Thanks Carol
Date: 12/11/2011 3:54:00 PM
This entry reminds me a bit of Roger Whittaker's hit song "I Don't Believe in it Anymore". You have rendered a fine example of a Rondeau poem.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/11/2011 5:42:00 PM
Thank you Robert. Much appreciated.
Date: 12/9/2011 7:01:00 PM
I read this twice, Bob...not for clarity but to capture the powerful imagery within....And isn't it a shame that man has not realized that war accomplishes no good! Well done! Love, Annalise
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Date: 12/9/2011 10:35:00 PM
History hasn't taught us a thing. Thanks Annalise
Date: 12/9/2011 4:25:00 PM
very powerful!
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Date: 12/9/2011 10:36:00 PM
Thank you Ilene
Date: 12/9/2011 3:49:00 PM
Excellent write, Bob. Best wishes in the contest. Kim
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Date: 12/9/2011 3:50:00 PM
An insightful observation Elizabeth. Thanks
Date: 12/9/2011 3:16:00 PM
Such passion and conviction in your verse. It takes me with you into the agony of what happens on a battlefield. A part of you is in this!
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Date: 12/9/2011 2:48:00 PM
Bob...This is such a nice tribute! Much luck to you in the contest.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/9/2011 3:00:00 PM
Thanks Natalie
Date: 12/9/2011 2:08:00 PM
Awesome piece, Bob. I must try this form - I love it. Many congrats to you on your wins too, my friend : )
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Date: 12/9/2011 3:00:00 PM
Thanks Jack. This form is a thinker.
Date: 12/9/2011 11:34:00 AM
Some of us long remember those we knew who fell on battlefields of yore. Their names live on above the arguments of why we went to war, woven into the fabric of our nation's lore.
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Date: 12/9/2011 12:16:00 PM
Well said John Thank you
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