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The Candy Store

The little girl stood outside the candy store Pressing her nose against the window Her lips wet Trying hard to swallow What the sight of those candies Produced in abundance in her mouth... The liquid anticipation of taste It had been a long time Since a candy Had slowly dissolved On her playful tongue Oh, the bliss Yet she knew…. She could not have one She looked longing at one particular kind Her friend had given her just a lick of Oh…it was so divine She wanted one…all to herself Not to share with anyone To savor…..alone To savor…long Tasting every single flavor That would burst on her tongue How she wanted it To fill her mouth with sticky sweetness To help her forget The bitterness of her days and nights A little tear trickled down her cheek Slowly she pulled herself away And trudged on past the candy store Perhaps, she was just not meant To have certain treats She smiled through her tears As she kicked a stone aside Now that she had seen it At least she could dream Of floating away On sugary cotton candy clouds Of wispy pink Savoring in her mouth the glorious sweetness Of her forbidden treat Eileen Manassian Ghali

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/18/2014 1:30:00 AM
I love this poem.poignantly sweet. sometimes things we long to have just cannot be reached simply because they are not meant for us in the first place...<3
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Nudershada Cabanes
Date: 1/18/2014 1:34:00 AM
making this my favorite. the image that this poem has evoked brings a memory of a little girl that we once were.
Date: 10/18/2013 11:27:00 AM
The fulfillment we seek begins at such a young age. We learn to accept that we can't always grasp on to what we want but somehow need to find some comfort in what we have. There is always hope for better. Very thoughtful work
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/21/2013 3:20:00 PM
Sweet of you to share this insight, my dear....thanks......
Date: 10/17/2013 7:57:00 PM
I felt the same way the other day looking at a Maserati through the showroom window, seems we can't always have what we want, but I'm just has happy buzzing along in my Peugeot-rati lol. Love the use of child and sweets in this write, suppose in some ways we never grow up. Super write. Take care, Richard
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/18/2013 10:08:00 AM
Oh....so cars do it for you, Mr Seal....If I had the money, I'd buy you one! I can't even buy my little candy....Be happy and content. I never do grow up, Mr Seal...I guess you must name me Baby Desert Orchid....
Date: 10/17/2013 7:56:00 AM
I really feel this one. When I was a kid we rarely got treats. I think that's why I have such a sweet tooth now. This is a powerful metophor for want and dreaming. Straight to my favorites.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/18/2013 10:48:00 AM
now at this stage in my life I feel I have been given so much and sometimes I fear it will somehow slip away like I am living in a dream. If it is I don't wish to wake up.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/18/2013 10:10:00 AM
Oh...it is bad to to get what you want. I was the youngest, a girl.....Mom had me at 41...I was a SURPRISE....After two boys, you can believe I got spoiled....Yea, used to getting what I want. Life isn't that way, though, and so.....it makes it that much more difficult to have and not to get....See, so I guess both ways....not a good thing. Thanks ever so much for faving this, Richard.
Date: 10/17/2013 7:17:00 AM
Hello my Girl...what kind of candy do you love..I'll send some!!!!!!...make some.....whatever to get it to ya! .. :-) great poem.....love it when you write like this..you are very very good at it.....luv ya....MD
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/18/2013 10:11:00 AM
:) I don't love candy as much as I love decadent chocolate!!!! Anything gooey and oozing with that brown yummy stuff, and I'm yours! :) Hugs, MD....I know that you love me....I love you too! :)
Date: 10/17/2013 2:42:00 AM
It seems like we yearn most for the things we can't have. good poem
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/18/2013 10:11:00 AM
Now....ain't that the truth!
Date: 10/16/2013 8:47:00 PM
Hi Eileen, Lovely child like imagery here.. Ken
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/18/2013 10:12:00 AM
Thanks, Ken....sometimes the child in us never grows up!!! :)
Date: 10/16/2013 6:52:00 PM
Awww, I feel sorry for this poor child. The forbidden is always best. Hey, girlfriend, check out an oldie of mine, "Lollie Junkie". It's kind of along the same lines but not - erm - quite (lol). I hope you're having a good one, my friend. Muuuchly warmly huggalies. Licia :-)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/18/2013 10:13:00 AM
Licia....will look it up. I have a feeling I know what that one is all about, you naughty girl you! Huggalies back at ya!!!! Smooches too!
Date: 10/16/2013 6:27:00 PM
this poem captures yearning so well - great job, eileen! i enjoyed it...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/18/2013 10:14:00 AM
Thanks, Ilene...I enjoyed your visit, my dear. Always a pleasure to hear from you!
Date: 10/16/2013 3:21:00 PM
Forbidden treats are always the sweeyest..Since they re forbidden..We pass by them..then dream about them..As such is life.We yearn for its sweetness and when we can t have such..We dream..and Our crave would be satisfied at least for a moment.An excellent poem dear
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/18/2013 10:16:00 AM
Yes, you are right, my dear. Isn't that the truth of the matter. How are you, sweetie? I hope that life is treating you well and that you are happy. You are as sweet as candy....
Date: 10/16/2013 9:46:00 AM
ohhh, the craving serves as a poignant backdrop to this piece, creating a sense of heartache and redemption. well written,dear eileen... :) huggs
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/18/2013 10:17:00 AM
You captured the essence of this poem so well, Nette. Thanks ever so much for your visits and the lovely words of praise...
Date: 10/16/2013 9:38:00 AM
Innocence & need all wrapped in this beautiful & charming writing.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/18/2013 10:14:00 AM
Thanks for your sweet comment, Drake...Sweet as candy!!!
Date: 10/16/2013 8:14:00 AM
A very deep and creative work of art. Nicely penned. Kudos. Wishing you the best of luck. Hugs and love
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/16/2013 8:23:00 AM
Thanks ever so much for the visit and post. I appreciate it! :)
Date: 10/16/2013 8:04:00 AM
emotional poem. It makes one see the true ill of need or deprivation...candies receding from her longing tongue like a mirage!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/16/2013 8:07:00 AM
Yes, this isn't an actual experience, Joseph. I could have all the candies I want! ;) You have touched on that in the second part of your post. Yes....a mirage indeed. Thanks for stopping by...Always appreciated.
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Joseph Matose
Date: 10/16/2013 8:05:00 AM
By the way, I featured you in my latest poem: Popcorn Music....JM
Date: 10/16/2013 7:14:00 AM
You keep topping yourself dear lady...The word 'bittersweet' never applied more in this beauty of yours - Tim
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/16/2013 8:22:00 AM
Thanks, Tim...Your post is ONLY sweet! :) Hugs

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