The Canal

The working navvy did dig deep 
He followed Brindly’s new laid plan
A transport system to complete
A salvation for the labouring man 

As the furrow cut with sweat and maul
With breaking backs and torn sinew
Each man in turn to heave and haul 
Sustenance for starving kin renew

 Tracts of land transform through spade and pick 
 Veins enriching the countryside
Bringing new life, each shovel, each brick 
Levelling earth, raising national pride 

A true revelation this arterial plan
Almost lost through modernisation
Abandoned, grown dense, dispirit man    
As steam and diesel grew within the nation 

Each lock assiduously built 
Before first steam engine’s whistle blew  
Weeds strangle, progressive man’s new guilt 
The canals ebb, debris as seeds strew

More beauteous now than ever been
Our arterial chart of the waterway  
Each torn muscle, victuals did glean
Bed and nourishment for one more day

The navvy’s ghosts look down, heads held high
Their gnarled hands rest in heavenly peace
 Majestic waterways dug in sweat with sigh
A once industrial, now beautiful masterpiece.

© 16/11/2013 GG  Inspired by Harry J Horsmans' 
free verse 'The Cut' which is a colloquial name for a canal
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Graham Avatar
March 23, 2014 at 12:07 PM
A journey through history. Canals are so neglected in poetry and yet so fashionable again. Thankis for penning ... Enjoyed
Guzzi Avatar
November 21, 2013 at 5:00 PM
So glad you are back in our soup mix I hope you are well! Light & Love
Dunn Avatar
November 19, 2013 at 7:32 PM
WOW, wonderful great job on this write enjoyed, enjoyed it alot . and thanks for the congrad cheri
Jones Avatar
November 19, 2013 at 6:24 PM
Mandy ..an absolutely wonderful write...I feel like I just watched a lovely documentary... in poetry form...my favorite kind of shows..beautiful poem..
Adams Avatar
November 19, 2013 at 5:51 PM
Wow...a great poem inspired another great and powerful piece...I stand in awe of this masterpiece you have crafted!
Dietrich Avatar
November 19, 2013 at 3:54 PM
wow, you were well inspired by harry. He is someone who pays such deep tribute to the common man and you have followed in his footsteps with this poem too. Nicely done!!
Horsman Avatar
November 19, 2013 at 10:27 AM
wow Mandy, this is so creative, living in skipton which it's self is a canal town,, i can truly relate to this wonder, your last verse sums it up in a nutshell, i really love this ... poetry at its best,, in fact this is living poetry,, and it does not get much better than this....,
Seal Avatar
November 18, 2013 at 5:56 PM
Great tribute to the men who built the canals Mandy, the navvies. I'm living next to the cut myself at present. Take care, Richard
Andresen Avatar
November 18, 2013 at 12:10 PM
- Talk about physical work, and it was real work! - Much toil, sweat and blood. - Nice to read Mandy. - A really good work. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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